tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post1164164726269216230..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: HybridGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-50642949401947083512015-01-25T03:14:17.916-08:002015-01-25T03:14:17.916-08:00That prose paragraph in the center was absolutely ...That prose paragraph in the center was absolutely captivating and stirring... oh my gosh if all these scary counts really did pop up one night I would totally lose it haha :D great imagery JodettePhttp://oursunshines.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-74756409353074214612015-01-24T19:11:02.405-08:002015-01-24T19:11:02.405-08:00Wow. Glad you don't breed crops or livestock -...Wow. Glad you don't breed crops or livestock - you'd create some really hard to manage hybrids, but in poetry you are a master my friend. This is amazing!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-57822853413553757792015-01-23T16:04:31.480-08:002015-01-23T16:04:31.480-08:00The way you've played with the forms along wit...The way you've played with the forms along with the context makes this seem so stream-of-consciousness-like. Very cool weaving of forms, Glenn. I wish google would let me go back. There was one image that really struck me but a phone call interrupted this poor old lady's thought<br />process.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-46678111049948019832015-01-23T13:25:52.591-08:002015-01-23T13:25:52.591-08:00so loved how you ended this...so loved how you ended this...Wolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-35433607661846555312015-01-23T12:55:50.887-08:002015-01-23T12:55:50.887-08:00nice exploration of the irrationality of dreams! ...nice exploration of the irrationality of dreams! Like how your haibun started with a haiku instead of just ending that way.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-10100161450585490552015-01-23T09:44:51.393-08:002015-01-23T09:44:51.393-08:00Well broken but I'm still spinningWell broken but I'm still spinningGailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-31267471411615832772015-01-23T07:51:32.542-08:002015-01-23T07:51:32.542-08:00This is dizzying, overwhelming, awesome!This is dizzying, overwhelming, awesome!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-85912611514423086662015-01-23T04:22:01.973-08:002015-01-23T04:22:01.973-08:00Oh my ... welcome to my nightmares!Oh my ... welcome to my nightmares!Miskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10280369979543928659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-14724247851560608892015-01-22T22:24:09.150-08:002015-01-22T22:24:09.150-08:00I am not familiar with the form, but I have to say...I am not familiar with the form, but I have to say how I admire your ability to connect a wide range of images with provocative lines; a stream of nightmares..or maybe, could be the result of a little cannabis you had after dinner last night! When I have dreams like this it almost seems like I know I am dreaming them, but I can't control where the mind will go and what feelings might be conjured up. Far out, Glenn.Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-19016715649729407722015-01-22T19:53:02.238-08:002015-01-22T19:53:02.238-08:00Plus more than a touch of surrealism! Altogether a...Plus more than a touch of surrealism! Altogether a wonderful read.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-67238026558611647842015-01-22T15:26:15.786-08:002015-01-22T15:26:15.786-08:00I like that you tried the haibun Glenn as you are ...I like that you tried the haibun Glenn as you are very comfortable with prose ~ I admire the fragmented imagery running in the prose like nightmares of random dreams ~<br /><br />Enjoyed your lunes too ~ Too make it more dramatic, contrast the imagery in the shorter forms or with a different topic than prose ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-88180008970379726342015-01-22T15:08:49.805-08:002015-01-22T15:08:49.805-08:00A million scenarios, absurd litanies, a lexicon of...A million scenarios, absurd litanies, a lexicon of illogical tableaus & irregular<br />plots, a crazy quilt of emotions, adventures, fears, joys, heartbreaks, pinnacles,<br />near-death & after death experiences, conquests, failures, being lost, pain<br />& pleasure;<br /><br />Everyone of these... exactly right for dreams and nightmares... wonderful workAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-25519137524332405672015-01-22T14:45:26.321-08:002015-01-22T14:45:26.321-08:00And a wow from me. It's bedtime here, and I r...And a wow from me. It's bedtime here, and I reckon your vivid writing will produce a nightmare!vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-51350395696294181992015-01-22T13:59:47.144-08:002015-01-22T13:59:47.144-08:00Oh my.....nightmarish like a modern day Poe...thou...Oh my.....nightmarish like a modern day Poe...thoughtful, fevered....and the collum line are excellent.kanzensakurahttp://kanzensakura.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-42204327726932882082015-01-22T13:49:15.340-08:002015-01-22T13:49:15.340-08:00Creative hybrid that suits the content very well, ...Creative hybrid that suits the content very well, Glenn. This fevered dream soon creates a fevered read. Very clever!Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-7379221980952930932015-01-22T12:57:33.501-08:002015-01-22T12:57:33.501-08:00holy crap dude...you took multiple forms and put t...holy crap dude...you took multiple forms and put them in a blender....lol....surreal....my worse dream involved a chase in which I was finally caught...and turns out it was myself....you captured a lot of fears in there....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-79462055339851537672015-01-22T12:56:03.796-08:002015-01-22T12:56:03.796-08:00A hybrid dramatic surrealistic dreamfest supposing...A hybrid dramatic surrealistic dreamfest supposing the American dream meets phantasmagorical nightmare. Wherein American forms interpret their formalist beginnings; where dream becomes more than landscape and art drips into technicolor reality. Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-22824204600993673472015-01-22T12:51:10.950-08:002015-01-22T12:51:10.950-08:00Vivid as always, Glenn. Some of those dreams start...Vivid as always, Glenn. Some of those dreams start off so well too ...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-51011786216804531282015-01-22T12:51:04.370-08:002015-01-22T12:51:04.370-08:00Hybrid in name, hybrid in form and content - this ...Hybrid in name, hybrid in form and content - this suits you to a T, Glenn! Sounds like a duck-billed platypus to me.Marina Sofiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15251903359649828285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-80293911441445493142015-01-22T12:24:11.167-08:002015-01-22T12:24:11.167-08:00Oh dear Glenn, what a foray into the nightmares an...Oh dear Glenn, what a foray into the nightmares and dreams you have, from Scarlett Johanson to rattlesnakes in an eyeblink if I had dreams like these I would probably not go to sleep.. I like your combo to combine the prose with micropoems as well.. very innovative.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-10829368878137741152015-01-22T12:14:41.989-08:002015-01-22T12:14:41.989-08:00this poem is a hybrid BEAST. I'd never go to a...this poem is a hybrid BEAST. I'd never go to ace hardware again if I spotted a grizzly (although, I barely ever do in the 1st place - not a handy man; ha.) the snakes weren't so pleasing either... ouchAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-45583349433487929412015-01-22T12:13:17.747-08:002015-01-22T12:13:17.747-08:00I do like the way you do Collum lunes, Glenn. Eac...I do like the way you do Collum lunes, Glenn. Each of those could stand well on its own without the other components of the poem. I think each of them is vivid, makes a point. Perhaps, on occasion, 'less is more.' Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-45977768575625940312015-01-22T11:49:02.704-08:002015-01-22T11:49:02.704-08:00wow... a lot of images here that i love... between...wow... a lot of images here that i love... between dream and nightmare... the grizzly in the aisle or the harley - first i thought wow - i wanna ride a harley one day..but heck..no breaks and the whole picture looks different<br />well done sirClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com