tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post1793321030989895815..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Blackthorne--Scene NineteenGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-9842887645399777562014-01-23T17:37:19.528-08:002014-01-23T17:37:19.528-08:00"34(two-shot) suddenly the whore comes to lif..."34(two-shot) suddenly the whore comes to life, aiming<br />a short vicious jab at Buck’s crotch.<br />35(sound cue) pair of clarinets, high notes." Excellent! finding humor in the actiongila_monhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03242200331389303203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-28654572690993700452014-01-23T09:25:45.741-08:002014-01-23T09:25:45.741-08:00You had me at 'Buck.' LOL What a ride to ...You had me at 'Buck.' LOL What a ride to the wild west you bring us on. Lots of action and fighting. Nice work Glenn, especially that great ending.Linda Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10387405429395292887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-39033906419375946112014-01-22T14:26:12.502-08:002014-01-22T14:26:12.502-08:00On the edge of my seat! Well done!On the edge of my seat! Well done!Jenny Hernerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15884658886582080587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-33126567098050185482014-01-22T07:14:30.611-08:002014-01-22T07:14:30.611-08:00Reading the Cole and Hicks books by Robert B Parke...Reading the Cole and Hicks books by Robert B Parker, this scene could be pulled from one of them. Well done my friend. Can't wait for the next scene...Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-83641535711962464182014-01-22T07:11:11.711-08:002014-01-22T07:11:11.711-08:00I read this and wondered all the time - how could ...I read this and wondered all the time - how could there be such immense details in a poem? The canvas was too rich - took me to a different level altogether. Abhrahttp://www.abhrapal.innoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-61774621684115740412014-01-22T02:25:43.279-08:002014-01-22T02:25:43.279-08:00A lot of slappings and somebody got killed. A myst...A lot of slappings and somebody got killed. A mysterious happening sort of game in the wild west and somebody got hurt! Exhaustively dealt, Glenn! Great!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-56496255597910261192014-01-22T01:43:48.103-08:002014-01-22T01:43:48.103-08:00“Cunning & treachery are the offspring of inca...“Cunning & treachery are the offspring of incapacity.” Exactly. Vivid piece.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13956890174353088216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-84537660837394510462014-01-22T01:20:40.740-08:002014-01-22T01:20:40.740-08:00Ah great read. Does everyone die? What was bucks...Ah great read. Does everyone die? What was bucks real name? So many questions! Love itR.B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05554769373788634207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-75722270590010318792014-01-21T14:55:03.520-08:002014-01-21T14:55:03.520-08:00have to read this fast and then BAM! the cliffhang...have to read this fast and then BAM! the cliffhanger...excellent.Ron Shieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15906697750712674256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-4106867329430093372014-01-21T14:47:37.241-08:002014-01-21T14:47:37.241-08:00The windmilling arms and the acoustic guitar linge...The windmilling arms and the acoustic guitar lingered with me long after the chaos of action concluded.Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-63685881334905708312014-01-21T14:47:33.127-08:002014-01-21T14:47:33.127-08:00i never thought to pursue the history
of old saloo...i never thought to pursue the history<br />of old saloons..<br />this matches gun smoke<br />well..and a little wild wild west<br />as well..<br />But perhaps it was tamer than<br />that..as human being tend<br />to fear<br />death...<br />i guess i got a date with Google<br />to learn more about<br />that...Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-13279181208691907502014-01-21T14:12:42.658-08:002014-01-21T14:12:42.658-08:00Time to get out and leave, run away is the best fo...Time to get out and leave, run away is the best form of attack. Nicely donealan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-13455944007044042852014-01-21T13:04:20.550-08:002014-01-21T13:04:20.550-08:00You left us hanging at the end there! Well done :...You left us hanging at the end there! Well done :-) I loved the face pace and the cues helped set the scene perfectly. It made me read fast to keep pace with the action.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-70296783817341649482014-01-21T12:36:46.568-08:002014-01-21T12:36:46.568-08:00yikes, quite the cliff hanger there... holding my ...yikes, quite the cliff hanger there... holding my breath til the next installment!mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-27003729030973142562014-01-21T12:33:51.307-08:002014-01-21T12:33:51.307-08:00I think it was Richard Conte in the film "A W...I think it was Richard Conte in the film "A Walk in the Sun" who kept saying, "Nobody dies." >KBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-32634722710921124342014-01-21T12:32:05.441-08:002014-01-21T12:32:05.441-08:00You leave us at this stage of suspension... hmmm w...You leave us at this stage of suspension... hmmm wonder if Buck got a buckshot hmm brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-56784326543671804502014-01-21T09:40:51.052-08:002014-01-21T09:40:51.052-08:00oh man...cliffhanger end...the tight shot down the...oh man...cliffhanger end...the tight shot down the barrels is a cool touch...its authentic...and i could not help reading it quick...nice action...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-25775118935047120482014-01-21T09:25:17.790-08:002014-01-21T09:25:17.790-08:00A fast-paced scene... the flurry of event after ev...A fast-paced scene... the flurry of event after event is intriguing. Loved the vividness of your words.HAhttp://howanxious.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-43361807332301726432014-01-21T09:16:19.566-08:002014-01-21T09:16:19.566-08:00I am really getting a vivid picture of this Buck.....I am really getting a vivid picture of this Buck...and I am not sure I would be hanging around with him if I lived back then. LOL.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-21631154124118331982014-01-21T09:06:11.477-08:002014-01-21T09:06:11.477-08:00ugh you know... he shouldn't have slapped her....ugh you know... he shouldn't have slapped her... and i wonder who killed who now... vividly painted scene again...though honestly...i'm glad i didn't live back in the wild west time...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com