tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post1872226659145984284..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: SardonicusGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-60498143524051647942012-09-01T12:15:20.563-07:002012-09-01T12:15:20.563-07:00this flowed so beautifully I would not have even n...this flowed so beautifully I would not have even noticed it was a tritina. I thoroughly enjoyed listening to you read this.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-66219519159680601702012-08-31T19:42:43.843-07:002012-08-31T19:42:43.843-07:00Beautifully penned and well put too ... love how ...Beautifully penned and well put too ... love how easily you've put the man not needing to ask for help and made of it a strong thing ... nicely done.<br /><br />http://leapinelephants.blogspot.ca/2012/08/desperately-missing-you-who-are-gone.htmlS.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-56606097126175337502012-08-31T06:04:32.556-07:002012-08-31T06:04:32.556-07:00Strong writing as usual Glenn. Thanks for sharing....Strong writing as usual Glenn. Thanks for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-37353852652317350542012-08-31T05:42:38.254-07:002012-08-31T05:42:38.254-07:00This suits the form so well! The wandering around ...This suits the form so well! The wandering around and winding up to a great finish. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-33269247817098908642012-08-31T01:43:02.454-07:002012-08-31T01:43:02.454-07:00Great stuff. I especially like your free use of th...Great stuff. I especially like your free use of the form, making it your servant, not your king.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-85154577031140063022012-08-31T00:47:07.558-07:002012-08-31T00:47:07.558-07:00A wisdom to your words.
Being a country girl, the...A wisdom to your words.<br /><br />Being a country girl, the city scares the pants of me, but when I do visit I find all very fascinting and poeticaly inspiring.<br /><br />For a while after my poetry delves into city sights.sharonleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13606000428878000878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-22785904491496185832012-08-30T20:24:29.954-07:002012-08-30T20:24:29.954-07:00One thing about this and any of your other poems t...One thing about this and any of your other poems that I've read - your poetic voice is self-assured. That confidence alone enables you to face a structure like this and envision working your way around it. Bravo!Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-87125621211397373212012-08-30T17:05:44.693-07:002012-08-30T17:05:44.693-07:00Yikes, lost in a strange city strikes a nightmare ...Yikes, lost in a strange city strikes a nightmare chord with me too. You wrote this form so well, and I could feel the plight. I like the strength of the ending....depending on yourself!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-5421197512075848812012-08-30T16:12:11.679-07:002012-08-30T16:12:11.679-07:00Oh, yeah--I've had that kind of anxiety dream,...Oh, yeah--I've had that kind of anxiety dream, too. Your last line is so good. (Mine are often about trying to dial a phone number because I needed help and couldn't dial it correctly).Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2012/08/30/of-summer-nights-a-tritina/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-87556794879970460422012-08-30T15:33:54.882-07:002012-08-30T15:33:54.882-07:00You have a great voice.
The imagery is nice. The ...You have a great voice.<br /><br />The imagery is nice. The emotion is conveyed very well. I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you.Jessicahttp://www.ambrielrev.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-56175476668968954352012-08-30T15:22:38.731-07:002012-08-30T15:22:38.731-07:00Well you described nearly every man in my experien...Well you described nearly every man in my experience - they just "won't" ask for directions. Women, however, will stop at every crook in the road and have peace of mind she's moving in the right direction.<br /><br />Loved the way your dreamscape gives way to clarity at the end. Form works for you very well.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-37099594035832505962012-08-30T14:33:23.867-07:002012-08-30T14:33:23.867-07:00Damn! I do believe we have discovered perfection o...Damn! I do believe we have discovered perfection of the form right here...and I LOVE that image. Encore, Poet! You rocked this one!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-12449322619168530672012-08-30T14:07:12.970-07:002012-08-30T14:07:12.970-07:00every man must help himself surely...i would like ...every man must help himself surely...i would like to think our responsibility extends beyond that to each other ....and even in NYC i have had some help getting around from the locals...i can think of one chinese man in particular...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-19828646214666988482012-08-30T13:56:09.855-07:002012-08-30T13:56:09.855-07:00Nice... I especially like the third stanza.Nice... I especially like the third stanza.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-52675670478367555902012-08-30T13:43:35.200-07:002012-08-30T13:43:35.200-07:00for me, each city has something familiar..i love t...for me, each city has something familiar..i love traveling alone to a new city, being open to see it with new eyes, find the familiar, explore the foreign..it's all about discovering and then drawing the map ourselves..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-12425986210406411152012-08-30T13:37:08.769-07:002012-08-30T13:37:08.769-07:00True, that.True, that.Doug Palmernoreply@blogger.com