tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post1953198458139062934..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Burmese BrightGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-4156574408259349862012-11-09T18:14:19.675-08:002012-11-09T18:14:19.675-08:00This was really fun to read, thank you.This was really fun to read, thank you.Sam Jamiesonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11218188379110585401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-64176046145975985412012-11-09T12:53:02.077-08:002012-11-09T12:53:02.077-08:00That first stanza put a nice smile on my face. I ...That first stanza put a nice smile on my face. I don't think I've ever heard of plum pie...is that a good thing or bad?RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-38846217956990704202012-11-09T07:02:41.229-08:002012-11-09T07:02:41.229-08:00This was soooo hard for me! There's not a lot ...This was soooo hard for me! There's not a lot one can do with four syllables...let alone rhyme...I come here, and am shown different...Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-79842869741393439342012-11-09T03:12:08.067-08:002012-11-09T03:12:08.067-08:00Impressive. The first two stanzas are real humding...Impressive. The first two stanzas are real humdingers.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-18710849769509828952012-11-08T23:54:39.945-08:002012-11-08T23:54:39.945-08:00great work within this form Glenn. Some very cool...great work within this form Glenn. Some very cool stanzas in here and an overall fun story-telling feel here. You really did great.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-72490216544959595492012-11-08T19:09:36.245-08:002012-11-08T19:09:36.245-08:00made me smile...plum pie for lunch....yeah..why no...made me smile...plum pie for lunch....yeah..why not..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-58786535957577665972012-11-08T17:08:57.737-08:002012-11-08T17:08:57.737-08:00Oh my, what a take on the Than Bauk form! Your rhy...Oh my, what a take on the Than Bauk form! Your rhymes are tight and fun; really like how you've made it your own.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-38512243350775017492012-11-08T16:08:08.257-08:002012-11-08T16:08:08.257-08:00Had a great time reading this, a journey of sights...Had a great time reading this, a journey of sights and sounds. Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-25116977564935987162012-11-08T15:38:19.846-08:002012-11-08T15:38:19.846-08:00This is fun, Glenn, and you do it so well. Makes m...This is fun, Glenn, and you do it so well. Makes me want to sit still and be quiet. My favourite is this:<br /><br />There is that moon,<br />just the boon, sir,<br />raccoons crave most. <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-84833280369355673132012-11-08T14:33:47.099-08:002012-11-08T14:33:47.099-08:00Very cool...love what you did here with the form, ...Very cool...love what you did here with the form, Glenn...quite ambitious too.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-13781073792014067442012-11-08T13:56:58.765-08:002012-11-08T13:56:58.765-08:00Sharp and witty, you do manage to keep your voice ...Sharp and witty, you do manage to keep your voice well. Looks like you tamed the dragon.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17392858163745232319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-85465956669159016462012-11-08T13:34:17.820-08:002012-11-08T13:34:17.820-08:00loved the first 'step' of the 'stairca...loved the first 'step' of the 'staircase'... great write.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-59297893244587044122012-11-08T13:02:44.612-08:002012-11-08T13:02:44.612-08:00ah, you make this poem sound fun and engaging. won...ah, you make this poem sound fun and engaging. wonderful./past tombs of joy/ --- /leap high for it/ great work! jane heweyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10089757266999986550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-81629154314334616442012-11-08T12:21:14.872-08:002012-11-08T12:21:14.872-08:00Lots of vernacular speech - very much your voice, ...Lots of vernacular speech - very much your voice, and full of your rhythms and paradoxes. I found this challenging to write in my voice, but you did it exceptionally! Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-4022708122965272822012-11-08T12:12:07.247-08:002012-11-08T12:12:07.247-08:00tombs of joy...what a cool turn of phrase that.......tombs of joy...what a cool turn of phrase that....and the inclusion of raccoons...ha, i like...this was a hard form....yours was def fun...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-50603699734077380432012-11-08T12:09:58.331-08:002012-11-08T12:09:58.331-08:00Tight form and I enjoyed yours. All I could do wa...Tight form and I enjoyed yours. All I could do was contort out a 3-line poem ;)Susan Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13241514922366571247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-22768033773111508212012-11-08T09:26:51.720-08:002012-11-08T09:26:51.720-08:00I've not heard of the form before, but think I...I've not heard of the form before, but think I have an idea thanks to you...<br /> <br />I especially like the ending.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.com