tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post2034041250082613343..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Lai, Lady, LeiGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-11150403650800346102017-08-19T00:48:20.998-07:002017-08-19T00:48:20.998-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.harada57https://www.blogger.com/profile/06015023155124017905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-33724969594798030992017-06-19T05:22:45.398-07:002017-06-19T05:22:45.398-07:00Brilliant and delightful read, well done. Greeting...Brilliant and delightful read, well done. Greetings to you!Blogorattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12821621371176285384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-77146370774687870642017-06-10T22:50:37.226-07:002017-06-10T22:50:37.226-07:00Oh the humor! Such lovely poems, it was delightful...Oh the humor! Such lovely poems, it was delightful to read. "poets can be wry", I loved that line. Jeren Nazutohttp://itsallaboutnothingg.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-65989418513270104912017-06-09T10:04:38.970-07:002017-06-09T10:04:38.970-07:00She's really cute, I liked the flow of that, s...She's really cute, I liked the flow of that, she makes you give a hoot; feel younger tooWaltermarkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619428258264938946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-44407899540647149732017-06-09T05:22:09.835-07:002017-06-09T05:22:09.835-07:00The second one gave me a huge smile Glenn ~ Love ...The second one gave me a huge smile Glenn ~ Love your sense of fun, no lies ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-20286720534667377012017-06-09T04:36:54.429-07:002017-06-09T04:36:54.429-07:00Love the song title! Your sense of humor shines t...Love the song title! Your sense of humor shines through both of these. You did good;)!Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-43686757334871364922017-06-08T22:43:35.026-07:002017-06-08T22:43:35.026-07:00"Poets can be wry" Quite evident in both..."Poets can be wry" Quite evident in both poems. And also the title. Thanks for the smile :)Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-53844283934720173812017-06-08T19:31:06.491-07:002017-06-08T19:31:06.491-07:00ha - that song did go through my mind when I first...ha - that song did go through my mind when I first read the prompt. A fitting title, now I will have this song in my head all night. Both poems made me smile. Ok, I'm still singing.<br /><br />Stay while the night is still ahead<br />I long to see you in the morning light<br />I long to reach for you in the nightTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-50359850307009127752017-06-08T17:41:16.827-07:002017-06-08T17:41:16.827-07:00Great lai poems. :)Great lai poems. :)Arcadia Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02632127814188649845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-58619414039974657022017-06-08T16:08:05.106-07:002017-06-08T16:08:05.106-07:00Enough's been said about your wording being wr...Enough's been said about your wording being wry. Take cheer that no one brought "ham" into it. Both poems were great! You are a wright guy, Glenn.Charleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08662221501459533188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-33220131121531744892017-06-08T15:47:45.867-07:002017-06-08T15:47:45.867-07:00Marvelous opening lines - damn lie, or not. Marvelous opening lines - damn lie, or not. Jillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14971432705586726610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-20575381777261471652017-06-08T15:06:09.875-07:002017-06-08T15:06:09.875-07:00Great essence in those lines, well done.Great essence in those lines, well done.Blogorattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12821621371176285384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-35667316411096773342017-06-08T15:04:53.828-07:002017-06-08T15:04:53.828-07:00
Oh Glenn, you wry guy, these are winners!<br />Oh Glenn, you wry guy, these are winners!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-91038126803643337542017-06-08T13:56:56.943-07:002017-06-08T13:56:56.943-07:00Nice lai to a lady.Nice lai to a lady.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-43063227229099716422017-06-08T13:34:28.564-07:002017-06-08T13:34:28.564-07:00Love these, Glenn. Your cadence and flow remind me...Love these, Glenn. Your cadence and flow remind me of one of my favorite forms, the Ovillejo. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-30213287086256145692017-06-08T13:25:00.991-07:002017-06-08T13:25:00.991-07:00Your punning title made me smile, Glenn! You are p...Your punning title made me smile, Glenn! You are proof that 'Poets can be wry'!Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-25267604255187356752017-06-08T13:06:34.948-07:002017-06-08T13:06:34.948-07:00Both of these are great, Glenn. You showed how the...Both of these are great, Glenn. You showed how the form can be adaptable to different moods and I appreciate that so much. I agree with Bjorn--the second one is so fun.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-85895633802602113752017-06-08T13:05:04.248-07:002017-06-08T13:05:04.248-07:00Lei Lady Lai.......so clever are you! And I LOVE ...Lei Lady Lai.......so clever are you! And I LOVE these -- especially that second one. Makin' me smile...ya old coot! :)lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-71084900544592990772017-06-08T12:53:21.395-07:002017-06-08T12:53:21.395-07:00Two great examples Glenn... especially loved the s...Two great examples Glenn... especially loved the second one... made me smile.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com