tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post2236803333428113827..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Blackthorne : Scene 30Glenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-80513807217889994142014-11-30T18:59:19.935-08:002014-11-30T18:59:19.935-08:00Pretty tense scene! Sounds like Buck is going to s...Pretty tense scene! Sounds like Buck is going to stir some shit up soon. The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-46913726825174527422014-10-29T08:32:51.421-07:002014-10-29T08:32:51.421-07:00I do have a manuscript unpublished novel that I am...I do have a manuscript unpublished novel that I am working from, but it was written over 40 years ago, so I am tweaking it as I transcribe it, transform it into cinemagenic form. I do have another novel unpublished, a detective story, takes place in 70's Seattle, called BAERBAK. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-3467495822453260972014-10-28T10:52:20.606-07:002014-10-28T10:52:20.606-07:00Love the rich detail and am curious if you have th...Love the rich detail and am curious if you have this all planned out till the end....or has the script of the story taken on a life of its own during the process and caused you to detour from the original ideas?...would like to know if there are other stories in you fermenting???<br />Good stuff, G!Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-7056554098331050682014-10-27T05:23:55.282-07:002014-10-27T05:23:55.282-07:00Sounds more like he was drinking "moonshine&q...Sounds more like he was drinking "moonshine" than whiskey (probably tasted closer to that too!) I like how you've woven the music in with your words. Sparks the imagination and makes the scene come alive to the senses.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-28108203690610618322014-10-27T01:33:40.450-07:002014-10-27T01:33:40.450-07:00You're such a great scene writer, Glenn.. Gosh...You're such a great scene writer, Glenn.. Gosh, I do hope you've got an agent in the wings, feeding the Studios your works. Wonderful imagery, I'd love to see them put to the screen. xVivienne, of OneVoicePoetryAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-73856661956575958832014-10-26T19:43:32.486-07:002014-10-26T19:43:32.486-07:00drinkin's got more folk into trouble by gettin...drinkin's got more folk into trouble by gettin' them outta their heads. here, though... I suspect these two can handle it.<br /><br />love this series ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-25153722172807308462014-10-26T14:59:23.177-07:002014-10-26T14:59:23.177-07:00You paint such a good image of the West, Glenn. Ha...You paint such a good image of the West, Glenn. Have you visited Virginia City--just about 15-20 miles from Reno. And so many other Ghost Towns in NV. If not, come on down.<br />Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-6927888656162185892014-10-26T06:29:19.707-07:002014-10-26T06:29:19.707-07:00Deep, Wild West = I know when lead has my name on ...Deep, Wild West = I know when lead has my name on it... and scorpions in the boots. Love it! I think trouble is brewing there...Marina Sofiahttp://findingtimetowrite.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-71045885705402694542014-10-26T05:59:43.685-07:002014-10-26T05:59:43.685-07:00wonder what he will do with knowing that the lead ...wonder what he will do with knowing that the lead with his name on it took the life of another....that will tell me much of his character...come on, lets ride the whirlwind....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-72491520378714644682014-10-26T05:24:33.609-07:002014-10-26T05:24:33.609-07:00oooh... I knew we could count on Buck. the whiskey...oooh... I knew we could count on Buck. the whiskey scene made me smile... and i love the way you build up the suspense!mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-59563980763650619342014-10-26T05:24:21.759-07:002014-10-26T05:24:21.759-07:00Like bourbon warm and straight. Great storytelling...Like bourbon warm and straight. Great storytelling here. Full of testosterones' and show down. When you do the audio, that is calming. Until; he decides to stick around for a piece. seasideauthorhttp://matineemercy.blogspot.com/2014/07/feeble-change.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-7267633859568293942014-10-25T21:59:23.801-07:002014-10-25T21:59:23.801-07:00Too many people would like that. No, think I’ll be...Too many people would like that. No, think I’ll be sticking<br />around for a piece.<br /><br />Spite - better'n any damned whiskey!John Richterhttp://johnallenrichter.wordpress.com/2014/10/13/1258/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-305427291211348662014-10-25T20:02:06.441-07:002014-10-25T20:02:06.441-07:00Glenn, I could see this in my mind's eye and s...Glenn, I could see this in my mind's eye and smell it as well. No single malt here!<br /><br />janetjanethttp://sustainabilitea.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-76457246471934608912014-10-25T17:15:42.925-07:002014-10-25T17:15:42.925-07:00Glenn this is my first time reading a scene of you...Glenn this is my first time reading a scene of yours--you have a real ease with dialogue that I envy!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-56758280286286637642014-10-25T17:02:56.734-07:002014-10-25T17:02:56.734-07:00The detailed vividly described store.. reminds me ...The detailed vividly described store.. reminds me of a wood floored store.. named Manning's in my local area.. and truly until just a few decades ago.. cowboys did come in.. with spittoons.. and rifles in the trucks.. as it is a hunting mecca where i live too..<br /><br />The only difference is.. there was no gun showdowns.. just displays of man<br />li<br />ness..:)or madness.. or posturing.. to see who can be seen.. as the top dog..too..:)and those days do seem gone now.. as people are often too busy.. to be man or woman.. just a tool.. like a gun.....Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-32838317259752508592014-10-25T16:39:23.937-07:002014-10-25T16:39:23.937-07:00I am like Claudia, I like the smell of whiskey but...I am like Claudia, I like the smell of whiskey but not the taste. And I wonder why they do not drink Bourbon! I like the setting of this vivid piece, Glenn.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-23846100816053108292014-10-25T16:18:53.407-07:002014-10-25T16:18:53.407-07:00Glenn,
Another great scene. I really enjoy readin...Glenn,<br /><br />Another great scene. I really enjoy reading these as I feel I am there taking in all that is happening. I am sure a showdown will be coming very soon. Scorpions in your boots can never be a good thing.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-19943251044101551382014-10-25T13:35:05.407-07:002014-10-25T13:35:05.407-07:00"-Wallace: My boy, you only been in town a co..."-Wallace: My boy, you only been in town a couple of hours & you already got scorpions in your boots; that is fucked up."<br /><br />Great line. Love the broken-backed caterpillar eyebrows, too. Superb atmosphere. Thank you for sharing this.dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-19192463499968313172014-10-25T13:34:08.450-07:002014-10-25T13:34:08.450-07:00Oh, suspense is the air ~ I could slice the knife...Oh, suspense is the air ~ I could slice the knife with that stilted conversation ~ And that whiskey was something else ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-62158599520689062342014-10-25T12:59:13.751-07:002014-10-25T12:59:13.751-07:00You already got scorpions in your boots! That'...You already got scorpions in your boots! That's just great, not heard it before. Unlike Claudia I love the smell of whisky AND the taste. Just a great atmospheric piece of writing which I enjoyed :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-42680367312033195752014-10-25T12:48:13.147-07:002014-10-25T12:48:13.147-07:00A pungent scene, so well painted. I, too, love the...A pungent scene, so well painted. I, too, love the caterpillar eyebrows. And the sound effects. Big-time.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-43900511970100933472014-10-25T12:09:19.080-07:002014-10-25T12:09:19.080-07:00ha - i love the smell of whiskey but hate the tast...ha - i love the smell of whiskey but hate the taste - cello, sax and piano play well together - and the snake rattle and jazz brush already announce the next fighting scene...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-15579770940606846472014-10-25T10:52:39.358-07:002014-10-25T10:52:39.358-07:00Yes, seems like another fight is on the horizon.Yes, seems like another fight is on the horizon.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-46610314390074705742014-10-25T09:02:38.671-07:002014-10-25T09:02:38.671-07:00Yay.. Buck's one cool rabbit that's for su...Yay.. Buck's one cool rabbit that's for sure.. love the caterpillar eye-brows.. and the inventory of the store... Buck seem intent on having a showdown.. :-) brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com