tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post2937841314191611404..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Blackthorne, Scene 43Glenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-14060993425805879152015-08-10T04:04:10.652-07:002015-08-10T04:04:10.652-07:00Behind the bar was a short, but husky, Mexican, wi...Behind the bar was a short, but husky, Mexican, with a brown towel draped on one shoulder. He had a rope-burn scar on his muscular neck, his hair was shiny black, worn Apache-long, tied in back, with Indian bangs, a droopy thin mustache grew like wild grain over his upper lip<br /><br />Your description is fantastic. It is almost as though one is there looking at the specimens of different persons who are very much different from the ordinary. Great lines Glenn!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-45921573786495267202015-08-09T10:16:59.030-07:002015-08-09T10:16:59.030-07:00this line! " a droopy thin mustache grew like...this line! " a droopy thin mustache grew like wild grain over his upper lip"<br /><br />fantastic. love this ongoing piece, Glenn - we get to savor the pace, like a fine strong whisky... ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-65380956999278146412015-08-07T23:15:22.578-07:002015-08-07T23:15:22.578-07:00...cantina, Johnny, Buck, Matteo, whiskey, drummin......cantina, Johnny, Buck, Matteo, whiskey, drumming fingers, bad teeth, guitar strumming, women laughing = equals a Glenn Buttkus rip-roaring Western action adventure scene in poetry form.Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-75941512972163799042015-08-07T13:04:41.384-07:002015-08-07T13:04:41.384-07:00Brilliant job with the descriptions in this, Glenn...Brilliant job with the descriptions in this, Glenn, from the door with the Aztec calendar to the characterization. I found my new most favorite expression: hijo de puta! Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-51131972190514853872015-08-07T09:15:43.535-07:002015-08-07T09:15:43.535-07:00The beauty of your 'Cinemagenic' Poetry
IS...The beauty of your 'Cinemagenic' Poetry<br />IS IT takes one back to non-verbal<br />sensory feeling life..<br />rather than texting<br />it to death..<br />when actors<br />become more<br />real than players<br />of life.. the reality<br />you portray here is Truth<br />of past where humans are not<br />even<br />pArt<br />of a<br />play<br />or PlayLIFE...NOW..<br />Do you ever notice<br />(rhetorical <br />question.. i kNow <br />you do..;)<br />THAT in old films <br />everyone<br />sounds<br />like a <br />Poet<br />reciting<br />LIFE from <br />heArt rather<br />than just<br />living<br />a <br />Script<br />without<br />HeArt..<br />My 94 year <br />old Aunt who lived<br />in a world of story<br />taling before TV<br />and Radio at<br />ALL.. always<br />sounded<br />like a<br />Poem <br />ALIVE..<br />OH GOD i wanted<br />THAT so badNOW<br />THENin'08ah..<br />OHGOD i just<br />wanted to<br />LIVE like her<br />at 94.. and<br />NOWTHEGIFT<br />is mine.. she<br />was my YODA..<br />I could not talk<br />then..<br />but i listened<br />and NOW i<br />liVe<br />a Poem Play<br />as Well..:)<br />The GIFT<br />is not yet<br />DEAD..<br />thanks to<br />people who<br />still live IT<br />like YOU<br />and HER..:)<br />Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-57965493453872971882015-08-07T09:00:51.972-07:002015-08-07T09:00:51.972-07:00As always, I am there! I especially liked the must...As always, I am there! I especially liked the mustache growing like wild grain!Jenny Hernerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15884658886582080587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-65708621945897431152015-08-07T07:33:21.983-07:002015-08-07T07:33:21.983-07:00The guides to the use of music are most effective....The guides to the use of music are most effective..it allows me to hear as well as read the scene. Thanks for your comments on my poem.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-11451236319325866182015-08-07T03:47:32.337-07:002015-08-07T03:47:32.337-07:00Greetings Glenn, What a rich tale you are spinning...Greetings Glenn, What a rich tale you are spinning so lovingly and evocatively here - much respect for that and for the ambition of your vision too... With Best Wishes Scottscotthastiepoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266153714529613752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-2759537619157292212015-08-06T23:17:29.364-07:002015-08-06T23:17:29.364-07:00I could hear that insistent, ever more urgent stru...I could hear that insistent, ever more urgent strumming in my head as I was reading this. Very cinemagenic indeed, Glenn, and stopping on a cliffhanger, natch'...Marina Sofiahttp://findingtimetowrite.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-82765353518369177732015-08-06T21:22:11.072-07:002015-08-06T21:22:11.072-07:00Great creation of atmosphere!Great creation of atmosphere!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-50972346976294931492015-08-06T17:45:43.593-07:002015-08-06T17:45:43.593-07:00I've missed this wonderful tale... Love the on...I've missed this wonderful tale... Love the ongoing sense of drama and tension.... A saga to keep us coming back for more...mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-69856757224739235122015-08-06T16:14:25.309-07:002015-08-06T16:14:25.309-07:00You have a knack for blending the arts. This is su...You have a knack for blending the arts. This is such a rich example of poetic narrative that doesn't know its poetry. Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18337746905154922607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-83665699471317005122015-08-06T15:25:01.872-07:002015-08-06T15:25:01.872-07:00Love the opening quote, musical instruments and sc...Love the opening quote, musical instruments and scenery details of the cantina ~ Enjoyed this one Glenn ~<br /><br />GraceScarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-42918539573536315322015-08-06T14:29:23.986-07:002015-08-06T14:29:23.986-07:00Glenn, I think I might have told you this before.
...Glenn, I think I might have told you this before.<br />You should write a screenplay and direct a movie.<br /><br />This poem you have here is a movie for my eyes to see <br />and the wonderful colors and pictures you bring to the reader.<br /><br />Love it! so much. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-54549177514907018382015-08-06T13:27:06.126-07:002015-08-06T13:27:06.126-07:00This takes me back to my Arizona roots. love the o...This takes me back to my Arizona roots. love the old west. Thanks for sharing!Ken Higginsonhttps://www.kickstarter.com/projects/555110246/childrens-book-of-poems-and-drawings-by-ken-higginnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-40570525496597561922015-08-06T12:37:34.783-07:002015-08-06T12:37:34.783-07:00As always, I like who you use music to color your ...As always, I like who you use music to color your language.Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-53077001971805332482015-08-06T12:36:49.532-07:002015-08-06T12:36:49.532-07:00Excellent quote. When I took guitar, my teacher q...Excellent quote. When I took guitar, my teacher quoted this and lessoned me in each string and it's individual sound. And onward and upward to the big bad.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05470561916200090354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-52098656387652121922015-08-06T12:32:57.587-07:002015-08-06T12:32:57.587-07:00I loved the choice of quote.. such a powerful writ...I loved the choice of quote.. such a powerful write :)Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-2675249796350922102015-08-06T12:00:34.137-07:002015-08-06T12:00:34.137-07:00Lots of flavor sin this wonderful scene.. And I gu...Lots of flavor sin this wonderful scene.. And I guess business for Buck is really starting now. Compadres planning what to do with big bad.. Always nice to be treated with your narrative.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-59803002206496882032015-08-06T11:44:21.448-07:002015-08-06T11:44:21.448-07:00Ah, this scene did not disappoint! And the advent...Ah, this scene did not disappoint! And the adventure continues.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com