tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post3310548765278154510..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: BirthGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-49803057422955317252012-03-16T16:47:40.150-07:002012-03-16T16:47:40.150-07:00This sounds painful, birth being the greatest crea...This sounds painful, birth being the greatest creation, also the most consuming<br /><br />WanderWanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12384347526625976847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-54257589252017425672012-03-16T08:47:19.455-07:002012-03-16T08:47:19.455-07:00I think all of us who create are mad in some manne...I think all of us who create are mad in some manner..."all the words containing magic" love this line. Great write!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-10368863141349960542012-03-16T05:50:12.006-07:002012-03-16T05:50:12.006-07:00it's magic, but not quite as we knew it. Wonde...it's magic, but not quite as we knew it. Wonderful.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-23888193135686002302012-03-16T05:09:21.154-07:002012-03-16T05:09:21.154-07:00ha be careful of those teeth cracking that nut man...ha be careful of those teeth cracking that nut man...and some days are def like that...birth does not come without pain...you def spin magic my friend...<br /><br />late again, the word verification keeps me from being able to comment during the day...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-12802831359087758032012-03-15T19:21:04.384-07:002012-03-15T19:21:04.384-07:00This reads so matter-of-fact like and yet its so v...This reads so matter-of-fact like and yet its so vivid...Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-79948126726514164162012-03-15T13:49:50.384-07:002012-03-15T13:49:50.384-07:00I came by way of Shawna's blog. I'm deligh...I came by way of Shawna's blog. I'm delighted my curiosity got the best of me.<br /><br />"my mind immersed in chaotic bliss" - always...<br /><br />"the peeling paint from my poetics" - my birth, words I understand.<br /><br />(Hugs)IndigoSage Ravenwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17143502548162174269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-21619765410117655822012-03-15T13:42:26.244-07:002012-03-15T13:42:26.244-07:00Come see:
http://rosemarymint.wordpress.com/2012/...Come see:<br /><br />http://rosemarymint.wordpress.com/2012/03/15/marina-petro/<br /><br />~ShawnaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-86792749507224157752012-03-15T13:32:45.688-07:002012-03-15T13:32:45.688-07:00smiles...i like..sounds familiar somehow...
scrapi...smiles...i like..sounds familiar somehow...<br />scraping the peeling paint from my poetics..and yeah..in the end it's magic..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-4622621466222515022012-03-15T13:30:39.421-07:002012-03-15T13:30:39.421-07:00Phewwww.. very vivid imagery. Powerful and electri...Phewwww.. very vivid imagery. Powerful and electric in it's force.<br />Great writing!ourceditDaydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-38599779604690769072012-03-15T12:46:33.552-07:002012-03-15T12:46:33.552-07:00What a brilliant capture of the deepest writers...What a brilliant capture of the deepest writers' madness, the tunnel of thought that blocks out all other existence outside one's own reality.<br /><br />LOVE that painting.<br /><br />These are magic:<br />"neo-darkness"<br />"chewing madly on my acorn"<br />"chaotic bliss"<br />"covey of blue pencils"<br /><br />~Shawna<br />rosemarymint.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-47062740792274464872012-03-15T12:40:02.403-07:002012-03-15T12:40:02.403-07:00glenn..."all the words containing magic"...glenn..."all the words containing magic"...so true and so much magic!Gerry Snapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07269492251928362799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-8238382789093757382012-03-15T04:08:22.628-07:002012-03-15T04:08:22.628-07:00I love this one, the whole poem is a buildup and y...I love this one, the whole poem is a buildup and you can feel it building up to the verge of "birth".Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com