tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post3325449339746475249..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Charade in ChalcedonyGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-33045280574504046892012-05-18T16:09:53.164-07:002012-05-18T16:09:53.164-07:00Ah...that's what I need to do now - repose und...Ah...that's what I need to do now - repose under my willow and look into the late spring sky...lovely.<br />I wanted to write before I read - though I did note you had popped in pretty quickly :) <br />my piece can be found here in this moss of woven words...<br />http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/05/heading-south-monday-melting-17.htmlJuleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-73698436967999859922012-05-15T20:57:13.362-07:002012-05-15T20:57:13.362-07:00Wonderful wonderful sound to this poem; the image...Wonderful wonderful sound to this poem; the images are very strong too, but it was really the sound that carried me along. k>Manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-70785348810232504162012-05-15T20:40:25.938-07:002012-05-15T20:40:25.938-07:00I liked "petulant precipitation"
and you...I liked "petulant precipitation"<br />and your alliteration.<br />You capture and slow down these few moments very well.Anne Katherinehttp://bootlesscries.wordpress.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-56829739048016739212012-05-15T12:50:51.363-07:002012-05-15T12:50:51.363-07:00man, love the imagery and move over and make room....man, love the imagery and move over and make room...i would not mind laying there a bit just to enjoy the view and the sounds and textures of this moment...nicely done man.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-5744580786110218442012-05-15T07:33:21.682-07:002012-05-15T07:33:21.682-07:00I can easily picture you lying under the tree fing...I can easily picture you lying under the tree fingering the moss agate. Yes, it would be nice to know where it's been... I really like your musings, Glenn.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-88103194914667842842012-05-14T18:11:38.930-07:002012-05-14T18:11:38.930-07:00Fantastic imagery, meditative pacing, flushed thro...Fantastic imagery, meditative pacing, flushed through with transcendental solitude, LOVE the word 'chatoyant', I frequently use that word in film reviews and always get replies with "huh???), chatoyant is a state of mind unto itself from which to ponder the world and the mind.......Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-16525396188298070632012-05-14T17:54:00.414-07:002012-05-14T17:54:00.414-07:00Very nice. I like the images it evokes.Very nice. I like the images it evokes.Paul Baucknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-64315554128113742382012-05-14T16:36:49.902-07:002012-05-14T16:36:49.902-07:00This is incredible, Glenn! I loved every word (esp...This is incredible, Glenn! I loved every word (especially since you used all my favorites).<br /><br />"riparian repose" That is some lovely alliteration, my friend.<br /><br />"with the wild wetness wafting thick about me" Sounds blissful.<br /><br />"petrichorian remnants" I'd really like to find my way into this scene.<br /><br />"a battalion of green umbrellas" This was a fun surprise.<br /><br />I enjoyed this very much; I hope you'll right a few more. :)Shawnahttp://rosemarymint.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com