tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post3853611598013582468..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Blackthorne--Scene 33Glenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-52023877355093165762015-03-04T08:58:39.275-08:002015-03-04T08:58:39.275-08:00Finally getting around to reading but am still beh...Finally getting around to reading but am still behind..I like Salina's blackbird tresses; I love the sounds of harmonica, guitar and violin; great story and the conversation keeps us involved in a present day way, moves right along. Like Gay, I have not read the earlier chapters and hope to..it's on my list. Great western flavor even the camera angles..Wow!Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-79333195670582159432015-03-02T10:16:02.985-08:002015-03-02T10:16:02.985-08:00Dear Glenn - my friend. I feel about these segment...Dear Glenn - my friend. I feel about these segments as I do Downton Abbey. If I didn't start it at the beginning, I don't want to come in late. One day I will take some time and binge watch (read) the entire thing. However, until then just know you have my friendship and gratitude for your support of dVerse and even more for my poems and palaver. Thank you.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-90507191932182138792015-03-01T12:19:14.621-08:002015-03-01T12:19:14.621-08:00Another great segment in the series..she is her ow...Another great segment in the series..she is her own person. The ending scene with the rose made me feel her vulnerability. I wonder what the horizon will bring?Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-26077522594323918382015-03-01T11:05:19.293-08:002015-03-01T11:05:19.293-08:00This scene jumped out of my laptop and was acted o...This scene jumped out of my laptop and was acted out right in front, narrated by your powerful voice... The horse sweat and lavender really stood out... I was intrigued by the connection back to buck's dad as well... Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-37498056336537942572015-03-01T02:45:14.558-08:002015-03-01T02:45:14.558-08:00This leaves me with many questions... And the smel...This leaves me with many questions... And the smells across the poem were beautifully done!Prajaktahttps://anarmchairperfectionist.wordpress.com/2015/02/25/the-flower-works/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-23618680825193372742015-03-01T01:08:25.822-08:002015-03-01T01:08:25.822-08:00Yes.. Salina.. the woman in the middle.. neither t...Yes.. Salina.. the woman in the middle.. neither too soft or hard to break in the middle.. and reminds me of my grandmother.. in those days of old Texas way.. picking cotton.. much too long.. and surprisingly.. getting married at all.. but without the fluff of well heeled way.. with westerns gone on.. at a time when people do still rely.. on each other.. either soft or hard.. or in the middle too.. balancing a way of life for each other again..and again..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-49861657640038490082015-02-28T23:29:46.607-08:002015-02-28T23:29:46.607-08:00lavender, blossoms and horse sweat wow. what a sme...lavender, blossoms and horse sweat wow. what a smell.<br /><br /><a href="https://zongrik.wordpress.com/2015/02/28/in-state-faithful-lying/" rel="nofollow"> in state, faithful lying</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-33542217513024098082015-02-28T21:11:13.830-08:002015-02-28T21:11:13.830-08:00I admire the imagery and nuance, bright and grit a...I admire the imagery and nuance, bright and grit all at once ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-73251787377879053782015-02-28T17:55:57.881-08:002015-02-28T17:55:57.881-08:00What I was reaching for was a special woman who wa...What I was reaching for was a special woman who was a bit of a tom boy, which often happens to some daughters who know their father hoped for a son; much to the chagrin of the mother. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-87788434516365251462015-02-28T17:33:55.213-08:002015-02-28T17:33:55.213-08:00I am with Björn here, Glenn, wondering why they wo...I am with Björn here, Glenn, wondering why they would be disappointed. I have often heard parents voicing whether they wanted sons or daughters. I feel blessed to have had parents who never made me feel that they were disappointed I was who I am.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-994424560240533952015-02-28T15:23:03.222-08:002015-02-28T15:23:03.222-08:00What a fantastic write! Bravo!What a fantastic write! Bravo!Delainahttp://www.delainamiller.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-16615244506921697732015-02-28T15:01:57.637-08:002015-02-28T15:01:57.637-08:00What a treat to hear this come alive through your ...What a treat to hear this come alive through your voice. It's evocative and grounded in the western landscape that inspires expansive living. I too resonated with the horse sweat and lavender, the child that was her own and not the fulfillment of her parent's desires. Self-possession is liberty to be sure. Oh and thank you for appreciating my strange brand of poetry (bear hugs - since we're in the wild west cinemagenic).Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17392858163745232319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-52848533312429123452015-02-28T14:41:15.512-08:002015-02-28T14:41:15.512-08:00Lavender blossoms and horse sweat. Amazed it's...Lavender blossoms and horse sweat. Amazed it's those little sensual details that stick in the mind.author.nara.malonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07159847596372441526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-91594243058080978602015-02-28T14:31:10.501-08:002015-02-28T14:31:10.501-08:00don't we all get to the point of not wanting t...don't we all get to the point of not wanting to drift anymoreWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-9127734705004906162015-02-28T14:06:14.598-08:002015-02-28T14:06:14.598-08:00The way this story evolves is so very intriguing.....The way this story evolves is so very intriguing.. I must say the way the mother wanted a son, and the mother wanted a daughter -- both being a little bit disappointed was quite intriguing.. also the connection back to Buck's father gave us such an intriguing insight into Buck.. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-91750961449950609342015-02-28T13:09:37.697-08:002015-02-28T13:09:37.697-08:00I like the contrast of Salina's character- in ...I like the contrast of Salina's character- in the beginning she is strong as rattlesnake nest, versus the ending of her weeping with a rose ~ Appreciate the little history of Buck's father ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-29606488770815043722015-02-28T12:49:52.856-08:002015-02-28T12:49:52.856-08:00lavender blossoms & horse sweat....ha - i love...lavender blossoms & horse sweat....ha - i love when there's scent in poem... and this is kinda a cool comboClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-85357103801352882232015-02-28T12:20:11.566-08:002015-02-28T12:20:11.566-08:00And how can we tell the smell of her from film dir...And how can we tell the smell of her from film directions, is what I'm wondering...<br />But I really liked the 'flash-forward' effect with Salina at the grave. Wonder what happens next...Marina Sofiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15251903359649828285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-69731187467239405052015-02-28T12:07:46.133-08:002015-02-28T12:07:46.133-08:00This segment has a poignant touch, Glenn. I like ...This segment has a poignant touch, Glenn. I like how you are working the story, varying the emotional undertones.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-7271643254966869612015-02-28T12:02:07.911-08:002015-02-28T12:02:07.911-08:00what an interesting connection the girl had to his...what an interesting connection the girl had to his father...and seems some untold stories as well between wallace and the dad....nice progression on this sir...<br /><br />leave me looking forward to the next time....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com