tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post3936151223960909904..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: The Night QueenGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-63529274677113882232019-05-22T16:06:24.070-07:002019-05-22T16:06:24.070-07:00Wow! That was a great read Glenn! I particularly...Wow! That was a great read Glenn! I particularly liked the 'Slaughterhouse perfume' 🙂ChristineBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03076463027881296243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-15279478403910193422019-05-22T11:37:26.623-07:002019-05-22T11:37:26.623-07:00She sounds really like the scariest thing... and t...She sounds really like the scariest thing... and the scents were really the worst of it all... <br /><br />Really great storytelling.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-6675450148775737632019-05-22T08:37:46.876-07:002019-05-22T08:37:46.876-07:00Nice lines: "and lie on my back watching
the ...Nice lines: "and lie on my back watching<br />the star show, one of the last free<br />moving pictures." And reminder that it is a free moving picture.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-80096086925105906882019-05-22T05:16:18.244-07:002019-05-22T05:16:18.244-07:00Completely engaging. Completely engaging. Miskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10280369979543928659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-24247914252891493342019-05-22T04:51:42.612-07:002019-05-22T04:51:42.612-07:00Bravo! You are truly a masterful storyteller. Thi...Bravo! You are truly a masterful storyteller. This was creative and you certainly hooked me with your hair-raising imagery in this haunting tale. Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-85974465065666232742019-05-21T23:56:11.009-07:002019-05-21T23:56:11.009-07:00The quotation from George R.R. Martin whetted my a...The quotation from George R.R. Martin whetted my appetite for a chilling tale and you delivered one, Glenn! I like the way you set up the first-person story, with a little background, and the hint that something isn’t as it seems in the lines:<br /> ‘…Some can be dangerous,<br />but most of them are just down on their luck.<br />My heart aches for the shivering children<br />with the upside down grins & hungry eyes.’<br />The endless swamp smelling of ‘wet moss, bat shit, skunk cabbage and gators’ is a great touch, a forewarning, and the ‘ghostly herd of Angus cattle’ a clever red herring, which lulled me into a false sense of security before the shock of the ‘seven foot something’ Night Queen and her ‘slaughterhouse perfume’!<br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-26526657364582455402019-05-21T19:20:18.655-07:002019-05-21T19:20:18.655-07:00I love how you get into your stories with so much ...I love how you get into your stories with so much imagery! Well done Glenn!!Dwight L. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07992133580674047782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-77120347538135107602019-05-21T14:53:24.588-07:002019-05-21T14:53:24.588-07:00Great story telling. I love the voice in this. Tha...Great story telling. I love the voice in this. That story deserves a beer!sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01756314170839177900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-83108918529168158142019-05-21T14:51:34.199-07:002019-05-21T14:51:34.199-07:00What a wonderful amazing tale Glenn... LOVED IT. G...What a wonderful amazing tale Glenn... LOVED IT. Great detail, wit, imagination - top shelf stuff man! BTW, you and I chose the samt goddess... what can I say, GREAT MINDS!robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-10263615807694585002019-05-21T14:41:05.241-07:002019-05-21T14:41:05.241-07:00I would NOT want to hear that story out in the woo...I would NOT want to hear that story out in the woods around a campfire. You do know how to spin a tale, Glenn. "Slaughterhouse perfume"Jade Lihttp://tao-talk.comnoreply@blogger.com