tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post5202052538383250514..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: DaydreamscapeGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-84626722261734636192012-02-01T07:19:33.453-08:002012-02-01T07:19:33.453-08:00Brilliant first stanza - and then you manage to ma...Brilliant first stanza - and then you manage to maintain the standard throughout. Superb!Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-90007411937069297392012-01-31T12:07:28.174-08:002012-01-31T12:07:28.174-08:00Brilliant write Glenn...stellar opening line...and...Brilliant write Glenn...stellar opening line...and I love love love the McDonald's arches...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-11089395786605027942012-01-31T06:19:46.208-08:002012-01-31T06:19:46.208-08:00The read was a joy on the ear - thank you.
Anna :...The read was a joy on the ear - thank you.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-87810293114914385982012-01-30T18:31:16.234-08:002012-01-30T18:31:16.234-08:00I love that you saw the boomerang too .... it just...I love that you saw the boomerang too .... it just jumped out at me!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-53608345094013762722012-01-30T18:18:16.523-08:002012-01-30T18:18:16.523-08:00Thank you for including you reading the poem. I ge...Thank you for including you reading the poem. I get it much better that way.I love your voice, and the cadence. I could listen to you for days. :-)Siennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07029547380572433326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-59517053523739187692012-01-30T17:20:46.289-08:002012-01-30T17:20:46.289-08:00I can see all the pictures you painted with words....I can see all the pictures you painted with words...Thank you Glenn.ninotazizhttp://www.poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-18268573821714578722012-01-30T12:49:09.445-08:002012-01-30T12:49:09.445-08:00I love this line: "tropical toucans stab mang...I love this line: "tropical toucans stab mangos with stiletto beaks" ... and butter on strawberries. LOL. So cute. :)<br /><br />This week's prompt is up, if you're interested. I hope you are!<br /><br />~Shawna<br />rosemarymint.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-1622814507415471612012-01-30T11:28:51.913-08:002012-01-30T11:28:51.913-08:00Brilliant, approached the painting like a Rorschac...Brilliant, approached the painting like a Rorschach Test, mentally melded with it, examined each shape and colour, pieced strokes together, stream of consciousness transformed into words, lived in the painting and recounted the experience verse, good stuffAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-57616995063701628112012-01-30T11:04:29.089-08:002012-01-30T11:04:29.089-08:00I love the way you took this apart and put it back...I love the way you took this apart and put it back together again with your words.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-54111176265332381532012-01-30T09:39:35.456-08:002012-01-30T09:39:35.456-08:00wow this is like hemoraging imagery...the toucans ...wow this is like hemoraging imagery...the toucans is a cool touch...ack on the arches going red...yellow daisies with black tongues is def one that sticks too glenn...nicely done...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-11307081099301075462012-01-30T09:03:21.535-08:002012-01-30T09:03:21.535-08:00"...epees clank seriously in mock combat,&quo..."...epees clank seriously in mock combat,"<br /><br />So much you captured and pulled from this image. I, too, thought of epees, but only after my own piece was written and posted (and described as "negative images" instead). Really fascinating, I enjoyed this.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.com