tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post5255658504792329752..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: ProjectileGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-80683740496714806272012-05-19T12:18:35.977-07:002012-05-19T12:18:35.977-07:00You crafted such a beautiful poem here, wide open,...You crafted such a beautiful poem here, wide open, and to do so in sprung poetry, humbles me, humbles anyone.Orange UaPoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16632961217537118235noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-79241478025491679262012-05-17T21:14:14.419-07:002012-05-17T21:14:14.419-07:00Very moving. And the beat and rhythm of the piece ...Very moving. And the beat and rhythm of the piece kept we reading right along. A very tender write with much heart. I like alot.henry clemmonshttp://henryclemmons.wordpress.com/2012/05/17/sprung/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-398467472514855482012-05-17T18:06:05.665-07:002012-05-17T18:06:05.665-07:00Powerful write, strong words with strong beats tha...Powerful write, strong words with strong beats that move triumphantly line to line. The idea becomes a history, the history becomes a legend, the legend becomes an emotion and the course catches up to the writer. I'm not sure it would strictly be called "sprung rhythm" but it certainly snaps to its own rhythms, and if slightly uneven, the rhythms spring, line to line, decade to decade. Exceptional work.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-9955541213853711582012-05-17T15:58:38.976-07:002012-05-17T15:58:38.976-07:00It has taken you 46 years to realise that your mot...It has taken you 46 years to realise that your mother never left you. <br />She will always be your mother and she has probably been waiting so patiently for you to acknowledge her in this way. I'm sure she would have smiled to see your final acceptance of her because that is what it is.<br />Having lost my mother 2 days before what would have been her 56th birthday, I really do feel the ache you've had for all those years.<br />From what you've written, I'm sure she would be so very proud of this write.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-23918512294603699202012-05-17T14:52:55.993-07:002012-05-17T14:52:55.993-07:00what I like most about you, is you can tell you lo...what I like most about you, is you can tell you love to write.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-70868114078139873952012-05-17T14:20:56.342-07:002012-05-17T14:20:56.342-07:00Very very sad - well done too, of course, but sad ...Very very sad - well done too, of course, but sad mainly. Wonderful story telling here as well reflection. k.Manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-26667105117751753862012-05-17T13:50:31.646-07:002012-05-17T13:50:31.646-07:00tears man...you moved me to tears....some hard bum...tears man...you moved me to tears....some hard bumps in her story along the way...and sorry you lost her so early in life as well...heavy man...giving birth to death...that is where i choked up man...i am glad you gave her the gift of joy this year...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-83832486648113980312012-05-17T13:48:47.284-07:002012-05-17T13:48:47.284-07:00this is very moving glenn..and glad you celebrated...this is very moving glenn..and glad you celebrated in memory of her..i remember there were times during teenage years when my mother didn't mean much to me and then there were times she meant the world..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com