tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post6144997071321646011..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Blackthorne--Scene ThreeGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-83322264818909151602013-08-28T08:15:18.963-07:002013-08-28T08:15:18.963-07:00Amazing the detail that goes into filming; each an...Amazing the detail that goes into filming; each angle, each little nuance. I had to go back and read the first two scenes. For some reason when I think "Western," I always envision Clint Eastwood circa The Good, the Bad and the Ugly days, or even up to "Pale Rider." To me, he is always the quintessential lone man! Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-39724482602461309982013-08-27T16:10:03.618-07:002013-08-27T16:10:03.618-07:00What a creative form. I love line 22 the best. Ima...What a creative form. I love line 22 the best. Image rich magic you've worked here.author.nara.malonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07159847596372441526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-77608991473276831032013-08-27T15:14:18.712-07:002013-08-27T15:14:18.712-07:00I feel like I am reading a screenplay here.
Power...I feel like I am reading a screenplay here.<br /><br />Powerful writing you got sir.<br /><br />It reminds me of an old western movie from the 50's.<br /><br />:)Charlie Zerohttp://charliezero1.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-19969890431164687932013-08-27T14:00:04.007-07:002013-08-27T14:00:04.007-07:00Amazing script writing skills, Glenn! You forte in...Amazing script writing skills, Glenn! You forte in all of your recent postings! The 3 men sure are engrossed looking out. But the tobacco spitting gets the attention! Great write Glenn!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-64289417969291682362013-08-27T13:29:14.397-07:002013-08-27T13:29:14.397-07:00What an intriguing scene you have created here, Gl...What an intriguing scene you have created here, Glenn! My grandpa & I always watch westerns together. This brought me to a good place, thanks.Alex Dissinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01469434538735231477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-69310148288757084612013-08-27T13:14:34.427-07:002013-08-27T13:14:34.427-07:00I feel like I just watched the scene. So good!I feel like I just watched the scene. So good!mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-19391660220071948282013-08-27T12:30:43.314-07:002013-08-27T12:30:43.314-07:00A lot of great imagery. Love how you blur between ...A lot of great imagery. Love how you blur between poetry and screenplay.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-53081668886973162682013-08-27T12:19:58.201-07:002013-08-27T12:19:58.201-07:00again, a really vivid read. One can see every acti...again, a really vivid read. One can see every action taking place. I liked how you described the three men looking at a distance from where the rider is coming. The spitting of tobacco, close-up at it... perfect picture!<br />I am loving this screenplay(if I may call it so!?)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-62859216356087398672013-08-27T12:14:54.146-07:002013-08-27T12:14:54.146-07:00You demonstrate so much skill in the script-writin...You demonstrate so much skill in the script-writing format of this poem. I grew up with the Western Mountain man mindset, thanks to my grandfather. I think I read "Men to Match My Mountains" before I was big enough to hold it. This is so well done, Glenn. You know how to take so many eras of history an give them life for us.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-29120701996919134172013-08-27T12:13:40.062-07:002013-08-27T12:13:40.062-07:00Glen, I love your cinema-shot-scripts pieces. They...Glen, I love your cinema-shot-scripts pieces. They are so vivid and yet still allows the mind to conjure the scene for itself.>KBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-63896483252120752142013-08-27T12:01:55.376-07:002013-08-27T12:01:55.376-07:00I've been reading Blackthorne, Glenn. Script-w...I've been reading Blackthorne, Glenn. Script-writing looks interesting to a guy who fills his ten lbs of work with 15 lbs of imagery. Joe Heschnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-83683397028052095252013-08-27T09:49:29.782-07:002013-08-27T09:49:29.782-07:00ah you paint the scene well again... i can almost ...ah you paint the scene well again... i can almost feel the tobacco juice spit on my footsoles...ha..goodness... why do men always have to spit..? smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-66591337534408082562013-08-26T18:16:32.422-07:002013-08-26T18:16:32.422-07:00oo nice tension in that fast strumming...all of th...oo nice tension in that fast strumming...all of them looking out and waiting for who is coming....ha, i like the fat man's cockroach talk as well....good piece sir....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com