tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post7223595179208469023..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Blackthorne, Scene 52Glenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-13078965533991940312016-01-10T18:44:36.027-08:002016-01-10T18:44:36.027-08:00All this trouble, and they haven't even had c...All this trouble, and they haven't even had coffee yet. Trouble indeed! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05126230685516232230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-82265990860360774262016-01-10T12:32:10.601-08:002016-01-10T12:32:10.601-08:00Glenn - sorry I am late. Your visual treats are al...Glenn - sorry I am late. Your visual treats are always enjoyable - but find it difficult to connect - when I read a continuation. Is it not better to give a summary at the beginning? Just a thought. Hope you had a good weekend and wish you a happy new year. Mon.Esprithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11348192101465775124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-6117764456157249892016-01-08T13:22:46.989-08:002016-01-08T13:22:46.989-08:00The plot is thickening and stirring. Being an avi...The plot is thickening and stirring. Being an avid camper (not the in a camper-type but wilderness camping), I could actually smell the bacon and coffee in the air. Along with tension and excitement. A very heady mixture.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05470561916200090354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-2222714005027737742016-01-08T11:00:55.313-08:002016-01-08T11:00:55.313-08:00Nice write.Nice write.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-17498478168401792492016-01-08T04:28:08.619-08:002016-01-08T04:28:08.619-08:00He strapped on the gun belt, buckling it tight, pi...He strapped on the gun belt, buckling it tight, pistol cartridges<br />in front, & .50 caliber brass shells on the back side.<br /><br />Certainly well-armed one can get the picture of a group used to facing adversaries just as well-armed.Such preparedness will exude that expected confrontations on equal strengths. Lots of excitements coming! Very well narrated Glenn! Makes it alive!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-54770604883061609922016-01-08T02:04:42.961-08:002016-01-08T02:04:42.961-08:00Hiya Glenn, Listened to your for this first time a...Hiya Glenn, Listened to your for this first time and it was very telling - the poetry in your words is very rich and came alive for me... Hope someone picks up this script one day... Perhapsthis is the year for you! With Best Wishesscotthastiepoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266153714529613752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-54458462182825130262016-01-08T00:43:00.045-08:002016-01-08T00:43:00.045-08:00This was such a nice domestic scene, the calm befo...This was such a nice domestic scene, the calm before the storm...Marina Sofiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15251903359649828285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-43232015892120680352016-01-07T21:31:11.841-08:002016-01-07T21:31:11.841-08:00So when is this going to be filmed and turned into...So when is this going to be filmed and turned into the movie we all want to see. I'm always happy reading your words even though I feel as though I'm walking in and out of the theater because there's a racket happening in the lobby that I have to take care of. Keep writing Glenn! (and acting too ;-)Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-10548163467141130772016-01-07T19:46:29.297-08:002016-01-07T19:46:29.297-08:00As always, your called camera shots form vivid, po...As always, your called camera shots form vivid, poetics images in my mind, Glenn. It really is as if I can see what the camera sees, hear the sound cues, smell that bacon and the burnt slap in the throat of that coffee. Sorry I've been silent here for so long. Lot of rocks been toss d in my way over.Joseph Heschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13217169295029029233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-81032599922496042072016-01-07T17:41:41.622-08:002016-01-07T17:41:41.622-08:00Glenn, I have to be honest, although I'm not k...Glenn, I have to be honest, although I'm not keen on your Blackthorne poems, this is the first time I decided to listen to your reading of it. You have a wonderfully evocative voice that is almost plaintive in its call to be listened to. While I still have a hard time reading your shooting scripts, even though I am an avid film buff and even wrote a screenplay once myself for "As I Lay Dying" which was very Bergmanesque,the sheer joy of listening to your voice was poetic in itself. Thank you for the experience, Smiles...>KBKBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09533821226832198828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-31239806317549412092016-01-07T15:43:04.950-08:002016-01-07T15:43:04.950-08:00Gayle, dozens of episode ago, we found out that Ca...Gayle, dozens of episode ago, we found out that Cash Bronson is the big honcho, the cattle baron, who owns half the town. He hires a lot of gunfighters. He has two brothers, Paulie, who is a gambler & womanizer, & Thor, who is a killer, & the foreman of the ranch. In my novel, this scene is page 68, & Buck has been waiting for this inevitable confrontation.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-25438870768274591472016-01-07T15:31:03.467-08:002016-01-07T15:31:03.467-08:00I enjoy every single scene, with the accompanying ...I enjoy every single scene, with the accompanying music, sound effects and angles of shots. Now I wonder who are these guys that came upon their campsite, what do they want, and who is Cash Bronson??Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-66640112563194473492016-01-07T14:15:56.392-08:002016-01-07T14:15:56.392-08:00There's some action coming along ~ Love the m...There's some action coming along ~ Love the music, framing of the animals specially this part: <br /><br /> In the corral, Chattawa stood as a dappled statue, the yellow lariat still dangling from his arched neck. The mares were up now, all of them still in partial shadow silhouette, with the red sun blinking through their scanty manes.<br /><br />GraceScarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-25969202517876977182016-01-07T14:00:56.746-08:002016-01-07T14:00:56.746-08:00Strangers
of tribal
excitement
protecting
resour...Strangers<br />of tribal <br />excitement<br />protecting <br />resources<br />in Western way..<br />lines of soldiers<br />in cowboy clothes..<br />one side against the<br />other.. always one way<br />or the other.. question<br />becoMinG can Western<br />ways invite<br />more than<br />bullets<br />from<br />the other side..<br />funny how human<br />instinct<br />lives<br />the same.. <br />Cowboys against<br />the Raiders works <br />better<br />sane..<br />my friend <br />Glenn.. now..<br />and i kinda<br />miss 'that'<br />Appaloosa <br />so wild and free..:)<br />Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-43426125838984878252016-01-07T12:16:34.084-08:002016-01-07T12:16:34.084-08:00I love the sense of excitement that this piece bri...I love the sense of excitement that this piece brings to the reader :D<br />Beautifully executed!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-27845479634113661742016-01-07T11:52:37.124-08:002016-01-07T11:52:37.124-08:00Here is trouble brewing already before breakfast.....Here is trouble brewing already before breakfast... love the morning scenery though... and I can feel the smell of coffee and bacon, it seems it's divided now.. the good against the bad as it should be... I look forward to the next installment.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com