tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post7313326462195503238..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Blackthorne--Scene Twenty-SixGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-23162980914125113892014-04-29T05:17:09.527-07:002014-04-29T05:17:09.527-07:00ha. the VO narration is almost poetic...kinda shak...ha. the VO narration is almost poetic...kinda shakespearean as well....nice tension as well sir...a great continuation...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-54513199193293497922014-04-28T00:39:58.601-07:002014-04-28T00:39:58.601-07:00just amazing, Glenn. what a cliff hanger ~just amazing, Glenn. what a cliff hanger ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-84651041538745565172014-04-27T16:59:58.877-07:002014-04-27T16:59:58.877-07:00These are fun to read and I like the audio..wow a ...These are fun to read and I like the audio..wow a lot of work goes into<br />writing a script and I say sir you<br />do an excellent job.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-39513908831227887632014-04-27T14:28:04.943-07:002014-04-27T14:28:04.943-07:00This is a great story. I'm bummed that Barnes ...This is a great story. I'm bummed that Barnes took a hit though. Hope he makes it. The sheriff sounds gruff, but trustworthy. Can't wait for the next episode!The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-60590866230078652072014-04-27T12:48:14.559-07:002014-04-27T12:48:14.559-07:00I agree with Beth - always leave us hanging like t...I agree with Beth - always leave us hanging like those Saturday serials. It's illuminating to read your work. I've never read a film script. Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-85524135690576623372014-04-27T11:08:34.140-07:002014-04-27T11:08:34.140-07:00Sounds like you're scripting for 3-D here. Wit...Sounds like you're scripting for 3-D here. With more than a little Peckinpah tossed in. Dialogue was golden. "Elected" and "nominated." ;)Joseph Heschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13217169295029029233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-88596776535858448782014-04-27T06:25:02.285-07:002014-04-27T06:25:02.285-07:00as always... wonderful description as always... wonderful description Wolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-2507039229894948872014-04-27T02:04:29.703-07:002014-04-27T02:04:29.703-07:00Reminiscent of a script writer with all the goodne...Reminiscent of a script writer with all the goodness of film world billings! Fantastic story-line Glenn. Takes great courage for the hero to face up!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-26326426835068933262014-04-26T15:03:07.018-07:002014-04-26T15:03:07.018-07:00A great way to write, as if in a film. Wonderful, ...A great way to write, as if in a film. Wonderful, Glenn.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-29753550637252753792014-04-26T14:10:17.829-07:002014-04-26T14:10:17.829-07:00Uh oh... Buck's in trouble now! The plot thick...Uh oh... Buck's in trouble now! The plot thickens.... Cue dun dun dun music.... :)mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-20737826926007875762014-04-26T13:54:56.578-07:002014-04-26T13:54:56.578-07:00Great snippet of film here, a poem for being just ...Great snippet of film here, a poem for being just this length, a rush or an outtake or something found on the greater cutting room floor. You have a great eye for this sort of lens onto action.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-52399319625124158402014-04-26T13:29:46.751-07:002014-04-26T13:29:46.751-07:00Oh yes that sheriff is bought and paid for... wond...Oh yes that sheriff is bought and paid for... wonder if Buck can change his mind...hmm another month til the next installment....brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-72616729455641818252014-04-26T12:52:49.105-07:002014-04-26T12:52:49.105-07:00You are incredibly talented. I felt I was in the s...You are incredibly talented. I felt I was in the scene needing to know what was going to happen next. Fantastic writing.Beth Winterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00123202473118521429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-25679001127285872022014-04-26T12:30:56.401-07:002014-04-26T12:30:56.401-07:00What a bloody ending, at least he survived ~
The ...What a bloody ending, at least he survived ~<br /><br />The sheriff at the end though made me think of what is going to happen next ~ Your hero has some nerve ~<br /><br />Grace Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-13054899876539863672014-04-26T09:31:40.261-07:002014-04-26T09:31:40.261-07:00i almost forgot we're in a movie... only got r...i almost forgot we're in a movie... only got reminded when the camera pulls back.. enjoying your storytelling glenn.. and the pub doors are already openClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com