tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post7615004597266087987..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Alabaster AnthemGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-20866824347171545002013-01-11T11:41:15.661-08:002013-01-11T11:41:15.661-08:00your work is wonderfully detailed and captivating....your work is wonderfully detailed and captivating..i wasn't sure if these paragraphs were all one poem..or if the last paragraphs were separate from the first ..and who wouldn't love the image of the white horse in the snow?Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-82279765632992199102013-01-11T03:05:13.892-08:002013-01-11T03:05:13.892-08:00clicking & clicking & clicking,
shooting f...clicking & clicking & clicking,<br />shooting fifty times,<br />the shutter clacking like a jazz drummer,<br />laying out a bitchin’ beat,<br />capturing barrel chest,<br />handsome head held high,<br />blue-pink eyes,<br />powerful thighs,<br />overlapping graceful lines;<br /><br />This is one tremendous stanza. It made a real impact on me.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-83044175259168666112013-01-10T18:54:55.638-08:002013-01-10T18:54:55.638-08:00Interesting contrast in images and changes in rhyt...Interesting contrast in images and changes in rhythm. I was reminded of two things in there, not sure if it's just me or an actual allusion. The feel of the opening lines reminded me of e.e. cummings:<br /><br />All in green went my love riding<br />on a great horse of gold<br />into the silver dawn.<br /><br />four lean hounds crouched low and smiling<br />the merry deer ran before.<br /><br />The last mention of the Twilight Zone reminded me of an episode I saw years ago where two earthlings were traveling to Mars and found their hosts to be very accommodating, providing a nice apartment and food, but then the wall was lifted up and it was revealed to be a zoo.Frank Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11512960953837979822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-44990021678618727992013-01-10T17:15:22.590-08:002013-01-10T17:15:22.590-08:00Very Nice!
RichVery Nice!<br /><br />RichRich Lalikernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-78212854790160452762013-01-10T16:42:33.606-08:002013-01-10T16:42:33.606-08:00Great with the visuals, Glenn... Great with the visuals, Glenn... Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-81215146549814042062013-01-10T16:18:27.931-08:002013-01-10T16:18:27.931-08:00Beautifully written, the brightness hurt my eyes. ...Beautifully written, the brightness hurt my eyes. Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-9159015295181983692013-01-10T14:40:44.028-08:002013-01-10T14:40:44.028-08:00great detailgreat detailWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-31899591625587224512013-01-10T13:15:13.145-08:002013-01-10T13:15:13.145-08:00Love the interaction between them - and the way yo...Love the interaction between them - and the way you call us to consider this from the horse's persepctive. We humans too easily forget that we are not alone on this planet...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-51692962957083444762013-01-10T12:57:47.304-08:002013-01-10T12:57:47.304-08:00very cool man....very interesting interaction betw...very cool man....very interesting interaction between them....i like the interaction between them..all very easy to see....i like you allusions to intimacy as well in the end...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-77755322046182977512013-01-10T12:48:03.676-08:002013-01-10T12:48:03.676-08:00I didn't need the image, the words just conjur...I didn't need the image, the words just conjured up an image in my mind that was right, just right, and in need of nothing more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-61339015066212739712013-01-10T12:41:56.925-08:002013-01-10T12:41:56.925-08:00Shazam! Man you have two females playing music, co...Shazam! Man you have two females playing music, color n less, and breathtaking. I do like rhythms of life woven in and the social intercourse takes the cake. Loved it. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-79485845477787110222013-01-10T12:13:33.602-08:002013-01-10T12:13:33.602-08:00Oh my! This is breathtaking, Glenn. You've evo...Oh my! This is breathtaking, Glenn. You've evoked so many sensory images. Great choice of title. Just everything about this is so pleasing.<br />Going back to read it again now!Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-45720563800184522912013-01-10T12:12:14.174-08:002013-01-10T12:12:14.174-08:00what an encounter..in the twilight zone..i like th...what an encounter..in the twilight zone..i like the work on the opposites... and how they give each other the frame to blend into the picture...good work sirClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com