tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post7935443209165760092..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Skate CreekGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-43671186245737363382012-10-04T03:15:20.897-07:002012-10-04T03:15:20.897-07:00Oh heck - hope your rear end is not too sore :o]
...Oh heck - hope your rear end is not too sore :o]<br /><br />Lovely stuff Glenn.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-60841431918222859882012-10-03T09:56:06.206-07:002012-10-03T09:56:06.206-07:00Poetic story telling, mysterious, painful and leav...Poetic story telling, mysterious, painful and leaving the reader curious and as discontent as the protagonist here. Good stuff.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-6963599431299222392012-10-03T05:04:51.848-07:002012-10-03T05:04:51.848-07:00aloha Glenn - this feels to me like an attempt at ...aloha Glenn - this feels to me like an attempt at escaping the self and the memory of a moment(s). <br /><br />moments of death latch deep in our memory and i can understand the attempt to gain a perspective - through the solo hike - that allows a momentary reprieve. because in any death if we look too close... close enough to see into those riveting empty dead eyes - we see the shortness of our own life too. <br /><br />of course the setting too... we see so much now about areas where death has occurred or been left in sparse habitation areas... makes one wonder who this person is... chilling. <br /><br />aloha. Rick.Daddariohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15663525408951676104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-5210022285914032842012-10-02T20:59:37.241-07:002012-10-02T20:59:37.241-07:00Oh wow... little bit of X-files... love the myster...Oh wow... little bit of X-files... love the mystery.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-2140231548033679172012-10-02T20:47:58.561-07:002012-10-02T20:47:58.561-07:00whoa.
this one gave me serious goosebumps.
amazing...whoa.<br />this one gave me serious goosebumps.<br />amazing workAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-52331012429835795652012-10-02T17:37:51.357-07:002012-10-02T17:37:51.357-07:00Seriously! I'm going to have nightmares of pro...Seriously! I'm going to have nightmares of probes now...losing ten hours seems to be an almost everyday occurrence in my world...I usually come to behind a desk ;) Aliens seriously freak me out though...and once again your storyteller spirit shines through.Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-11622747059863998622012-10-02T15:14:45.648-07:002012-10-02T15:14:45.648-07:00Aliens perhaps? well done write Glenn. Aliens perhaps? well done write Glenn. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-12293040072025681802012-10-02T14:39:09.686-07:002012-10-02T14:39:09.686-07:00well now you took quite a turn there in the end......well now you took quite a turn there in the end...so just which probes did they use....you might not want to remember that part...ha....this was so alive you suckered me in...i love nature too...but great twist sir...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-83721783107307513842012-10-02T13:50:55.547-07:002012-10-02T13:50:55.547-07:00Great opening:
"I lost ten hours last week
an...Great opening:<br />"I lost ten hours last week<br />and that missing time<br />transcends logic."<br /><br />I love this transition:<br />"I began to be aware of things, like my Mariners sweatshirt was on backwards"<br /><br />And your haunting ending, leaving us so much to wonder about:<br />"and the terrible dead black eyes"flipside recordshttp://flipsiderecords.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-46062693604358132632012-10-02T13:49:34.995-07:002012-10-02T13:49:34.995-07:00Glenn, you took me with you all the way up to the ...Glenn, you took me with you all the way up to the last stanza - feeling and hearing through your senses. The last few lines turned it into a nightmare, and I shivered.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-37575833584866564732012-10-02T12:00:09.466-07:002012-10-02T12:00:09.466-07:00Scary stuff, Glenn--great aura of mystery to this....Scary stuff, Glenn--great aura of mystery to this.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-50453824422182748522012-10-02T11:37:40.505-07:002012-10-02T11:37:40.505-07:00oh heck...some mysterious happenings here...first ...oh heck...some mysterious happenings here...first when you mention the hum i thought about a wasp attack...never hike alone...strange things can happen..just saying...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com