tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post795078910838930916..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Blackthorne--Scene 42Glenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-91258248657464327852015-08-06T05:53:07.426-07:002015-08-06T05:53:07.426-07:00Nice to see Buck and Johnny coming together.. I ho...Nice to see Buck and Johnny coming together.. I hope there is the next installment today.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-26525597909021390572015-07-26T04:58:15.386-07:002015-07-26T04:58:15.386-07:00The cumulative effect of these details, leaves a v...The cumulative effect of these details, leaves a very strong and tangible sense impression. The characters and the environment take form before our eyes and ears, as it were. Very well done. <br />Steve K.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-64167375648782757032015-07-25T15:28:10.772-07:002015-07-25T15:28:10.772-07:00Glenn...your poems are like epic sagas that play o...Glenn...your poems are like epic sagas that play on the big screen of our imaginations. So vivid!!C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-13578309374140466522015-07-25T09:17:36.442-07:002015-07-25T09:17:36.442-07:00Of Dogs and Women
of Jesus and Stallions
all do bl...Of Dogs and Women<br />of Jesus and Stallions<br />all do bleed<br />all do live..<br />some<br />wild<br />and<br />some<br />crucified..<br />i will to Just Ride..<br />and yes.. women are<br />my favorite too.. they<br />are my Jesus aSwell..<br />yes.. particularly <br />my wife..<br /><br />I RIDE..<br />The wife does<br />not Ride and<br />that is okay too..<br />she loves Jesus<br />and i love<br />Jesus too..<br />what's left<br />of <br />him <br />any<br />way..:)<br /><br />Hi Glenn..<br />this runaway <br />train is <br />tired.. <br />but <br />still<br />riding<br />writing..;)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-70314802960563292992015-07-25T06:14:39.564-07:002015-07-25T06:14:39.564-07:00Your recital only adds to this rich piece of work....Your recital only adds to this rich piece of work. Wow, what a delight! Thank your sharing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18337746905154922607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-36348818668616732342015-07-24T16:08:32.590-07:002015-07-24T16:08:32.590-07:00Ugh, I have to get my nachos when visiting... smil...Ugh, I have to get my nachos when visiting... smiles. You paint scenes with words like a master. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-90099942353984913562015-07-24T02:18:13.525-07:002015-07-24T02:18:13.525-07:00Crafting the moment with words. Excellent.Crafting the moment with words. Excellent.Roslyn Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-7728289346885328462015-07-23T23:34:48.890-07:002015-07-23T23:34:48.890-07:00Beautiful picture here! For a moment I thought thi...Beautiful picture here! For a moment I thought this was about the movie and then realized this is your work. Detailing was fabulous but I think I will have to do some major sieving to connect all the dots.Prajaktahttps://anarmchairperfectionist.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-60992580816289163162015-07-23T20:13:08.000-07:002015-07-23T20:13:08.000-07:00There is so much going on in this that it really d...There is so much going on in this that it really did help to hear it through your words/pace. Another great scene, Glenn. Alex Dissinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01469434538735231477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-61665932002505232152015-07-23T19:42:45.618-07:002015-07-23T19:42:45.618-07:00your right... there is music... amazing how we tak...your right... there is music... amazing how we take some things for granted Wolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-74780520622663701512015-07-23T18:38:46.023-07:002015-07-23T18:38:46.023-07:00Yeah, thotpurge, there are 41 prior episodes that ...Yeah, thotpurge, there are 41 prior episodes that stretch back in my archives over a year & a half; check them out, a few a time so that you don't get overloaded. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-62390791136275030582015-07-23T18:31:34.832-07:002015-07-23T18:31:34.832-07:00Such an interesting style.. should I be starting a...Such an interesting style.. should I be starting at the beginning somewhere and connect all your poems to get the entire story? The scene was quite vivid by itself too! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-60369073207311252422015-07-23T16:17:25.042-07:002015-07-23T16:17:25.042-07:00I like the name too but admiring the details in th...I like the name too but admiring the details in the conversation Glenn ~ I imagined the sounds & music as well in the background ~<br /><br />GraceScarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-49040197590982773502015-07-23T14:49:50.872-07:002015-07-23T14:49:50.872-07:00I think Glenn - that what you left unsaid here - a...I think Glenn - that what you left unsaid here - allowed the mind to fill in the scene with perfect clarity - nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-63473754239769841122015-07-23T13:59:28.207-07:002015-07-23T13:59:28.207-07:00This completely blew me away! Awesome :DThis completely blew me away! Awesome :DSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-39183032166313568782015-07-23T13:58:32.710-07:002015-07-23T13:58:32.710-07:00You have surpassed yourself with this segment, Gle...You have surpassed yourself with this segment, Glenn! I could picture the entire scene.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-7430322908090322842015-07-23T13:41:39.268-07:002015-07-23T13:41:39.268-07:00Glenn, did I ever tell you that you are a master o...Glenn, did I ever tell you that you are a master of words and imagination?<br /><br />Well, my friend - you are. This poem needs to be heard from around the world and the universe itself. Beautiful as always...you write like a screen-writer and a film director. <br /><br />Bravo!! my friend Bravo!!!<br /><br />p.s Check out my new poem I posted yesterday evening...You will step into an odyssey <br />I tore the very fabric of our reality. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-32546295095560374052015-07-23T13:37:47.607-07:002015-07-23T13:37:47.607-07:00Johnny pronounces it Hey-Zues, for sure, as Spanis...Johnny pronounces it Hey-Zues, for sure, as Spanish has found its way into his speak. I appreciate your issue with my calling this style "Cinemagenic Poetry", a form I mostly invented. Other poets here & there have toyed with the notion, but I have corralled it, honed it, & branded it as my own. It is beyond a prose poem, beyond a film screenplay, it is a poetic butterfly no one has ever caught before, drove a pin through, or named.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-3003670969455550262015-07-23T13:21:42.267-07:002015-07-23T13:21:42.267-07:00"Yes, this is my Jesus."
Best line ever...."Yes, this is my Jesus."<br />Best line ever. One question, is it "Hey Zeus" or "Geez Us?"<br />This was a rich read, Glenn. I sometimes have to strech my brain to read it as poem, because it is dialogue with stage directions, but I imagine that the Greek drama tragedies and epic poems were very similar, and thinking of Blackthorne like that helps me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-76105463522444293312015-07-23T13:10:38.476-07:002015-07-23T13:10:38.476-07:00see - what i always love most about your stories i...see - what i always love most about your stories is that there is always music mixed into it...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-57087768229542406202015-07-23T12:56:37.379-07:002015-07-23T12:56:37.379-07:00Excellent details. I so enjoy this story and hope...Excellent details. I so enjoy this story and hope someday. to see it onscreen.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05470561916200090354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-66988432433391925122015-07-23T12:49:32.861-07:002015-07-23T12:49:32.861-07:00Actually, the film is BLACKTHORN, a Western with S...Actually, the film is BLACKTHORN, a Western with Sam Shepard; a damn good one, a movie about the elder Butch Cassidy, still exiled in Bolivia. My manuscript, BLACKTHORNE, that I am basing these poems on, was finished, albeit unpublished, in 1970. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-51227443512744614212015-07-23T12:41:02.964-07:002015-07-23T12:41:02.964-07:00Glenn, did you know there is a film on Netflix cal...Glenn, did you know there is a film on Netflix called "Blackthorne"? Interesting script. Smiles...>KBKBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09533821226832198828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-23004029202004591762015-07-23T12:11:20.419-07:002015-07-23T12:11:20.419-07:00Pretty Sure Bronson already knows what is coming. ...Pretty Sure Bronson already knows what is coming. Ha. Interesting connection now too, him being the one that bburied his father. I agree, some nice symbolism in this one again, in the fine details.Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09037544390731217891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-13124692321138362582015-07-18T06:28:56.837-07:002015-07-18T06:28:56.837-07:00Wow Glenn - First the picture is absolutely beauti...Wow Glenn - First the picture is absolutely beautiful and what an interesting name to give a horse..a horse is an amazing companion and I guess it could be a savior in many ways. A black puma again strong symbolism here..my mind is whirling and there are some beautiful indian names...There is a some hidden depth in the conversation between the men..the whole scene just played out in my head. Timely insert of the crows cawing..as they speak of his father a symbolism of death and darkness. The scene ends perfectly with the guitar chords & tambourine. You are def a master storyteller. I enjoy these so much..I want to see it on the screen..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.com