tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post8663774267750410803..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Justuss Four All Glenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-83732266002386617462015-05-01T15:04:20.626-07:002015-05-01T15:04:20.626-07:00I just came over for the ride on this one.. as i k...I just came over for the ride on this one.. as i knew the creativity in your words will be spilling the beans on this one..:) Ah.. to let it go.. and flow.. wherever the cliches or not go..;)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-34852729126204504082015-05-01T14:58:13.856-07:002015-05-01T14:58:13.856-07:00some fun alliteration in this, Glenn!some fun alliteration in this, Glenn!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-61651732215929395572015-05-01T12:09:42.362-07:002015-05-01T12:09:42.362-07:00Oh my goodness, this makes me want to understand m...Oh my goodness, this makes me want to understand more about American politics...ok, I take that back. This was outrageous in description, so rich in "outside of the box" metaphors... vivid, packed with imagination.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-80801168978322218042015-05-01T10:02:09.327-07:002015-05-01T10:02:09.327-07:00Good grief, Glenn! This was something! The W rant ...Good grief, Glenn! This was something! The W rant had me rolling - and love the lines ' now & forever mute as a stringless lute buried beneath the sharpie- thorns of belligerent blackberry bushes.'And the entire calico cats stanza was a hoot. Wonderful! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-88705139534309992762015-05-01T07:27:28.492-07:002015-05-01T07:27:28.492-07:00I love your humor in your writing! Smiling over h...I love your humor in your writing! Smiling over hereJoan Barrett Robertshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08078385285085867796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-72971971363719497502015-04-30T21:15:05.479-07:002015-04-30T21:15:05.479-07:00politics is always ripe for humor Glen - I guess t...politics is always ripe for humor Glen - I guess that cat unswallowed his tongue.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-41299695054940081662015-04-30T17:39:37.952-07:002015-04-30T17:39:37.952-07:00Fun reading these. You seemed very inspired by thi...Fun reading these. You seemed very inspired by this prompt--I am still stuck but will keep at it. Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-66764127440885509592015-04-30T16:57:40.311-07:002015-04-30T16:57:40.311-07:00Smiled all the way through at your cleverness, but...Smiled all the way through at your cleverness, but got really happy during the stanza about the dog poets wanting word bones - from there till the end is especially fantastic!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-53249319464170785352015-04-30T16:05:01.661-07:002015-04-30T16:05:01.661-07:00Calico cats does it for me Glenn!
Anna :o]Calico cats does it for me Glenn!<br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-35446949144677990942015-04-30T14:29:31.464-07:002015-04-30T14:29:31.464-07:00I can tell you enjoyed this prompt Glenn.. the cat...I can tell you enjoyed this prompt Glenn.. the cats for sure jumped out at me.. sounds like a hoot of an alley to be is... splendid to see you so inspired. My fingers tried to trace through the meanings and my thoughts started to meander along paths I never knew existed.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-88716663713342437772015-04-30T13:36:50.483-07:002015-04-30T13:36:50.483-07:00Back in the day, after you reading this aloud, you...Back in the day, after you reading this aloud, you would have been greeted with many finger snappings. I cannot pick out any one image because they are all so crazy good. You took to this like a duck takes takes to mud. Well done! snap snap snapAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05470561916200090354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-55002594126826076052015-04-30T12:59:52.584-07:002015-04-30T12:59:52.584-07:00Well, Glenn, I would say you took to this prompt b...Well, Glenn, I would say you took to this prompt big-time. I enjoyed all of the stories you told. I laughed about dog poets begging for word bones. Ha, and sometimes those bones are hard to find!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-53746129376879052832015-04-30T12:51:39.587-07:002015-04-30T12:51:39.587-07:00I loved so many bits in this piece.
"he spews...I loved so many bits in this piece.<br />"he spews non-prop ignoredent, racecyst, elitryst epithreats"<br /><br />"...all those leather-faced larcenous locomotives, derailed, derelict & dusty, spider webbing in broken headlamps, ..."<br /><br />"may their words shine with foxfire, soul-dust, hart-brakes, & brain-icing, for the world needs them"<br /><br />Such a use of words and metaphors comes naturally to you. What an enjoyable read!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-89362650523150719082015-04-30T12:15:17.628-07:002015-04-30T12:15:17.628-07:00Do you know, you'll have me searching for part...Do you know, you'll have me searching for participles of passion-fruit from now on? That sounds just perfect! A lot of strong language and zany imagery here - and most of it works perfectly. I love this kind of experimentation - I suppose it's a bit like improv in theatre. I particularly liked the stanza beginning with calico cats with earthworm whiskers...Marina Sofiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15251903359649828285noreply@blogger.com