Friday, February 19, 2010
Jehovah's Wet Dream
Jehovah’s Wet Dream
I
grew up
wet in the
north
woods, halfway
across the globe
from
Shrewsbury or
St. Etienne, but
still
a comfort
zone I’m told
for
those European
expatriates dwelling amongst
us.
Rain remains
my constant companion,
pummeling
the prairies,
spanking the concrete
of
byways and
domiciles, drooling like
dizzy
demigods, spattering
all shadows, breaking
them
up into
shimmering pixels before
partially
banishing and
disconnecting them from
the
feet and
baseline of those
things
solid enough
to cast one;
straight
down in
sheets, diagonally driven
into
windows, windshields
and naked eyes
that
dare to
face the downpour.
God
spitting, cascading
in clumps, beading
up
on waxen
hoods and slippery
metal,
running off
rooftops, gushing over
gutters,
passing loudly
through those rusty
metal
pores of
manhole covers, rushing
along
frightened curbs,
racing headlong toward
divers
maws of
thirsty street drains,
becoming
a hundred
rivulets dripping strong
from
puncheon porch
tops, weeping passionately,
copiously,
from the
tender undersides of
devil-
black low
clouds, spraying like
legions
of angels
pissing in rows;
forcing
those ghost
riders to crack
their
spectral whips
mocking thunder, and
seducing
the wind
wolves to howl,
joining
the morning’s
torrential Concert of
Aqueous—
followed by
a golden fanning,
opening
ribald like
a geisha’s thighs
a
marvelous sun
break, the dervish
dance
of a
hundred shards of
light,
twisting erotically
into a naked
embrace,
sunlight piercing
water drops, bursting
into
an orgasmic
swatch of juicy
rainbow,
arching its
lovemaking shoulders high
into
a brazen
display of raw
dazzling
colors, the
full spectrum of
stratospheric
ethereal sex,
seminally staining the
compliant
sky, right
there for all
to
see and
share, to marvel
and
smile at,
to be touched
by,
stroking hope
where only void
resided,
vibrating the
dewy lips of
rainy
mist, setting
up a throb,
a
Gregorian moment
when cupids purr,
and
the soaked
and satiated earth
sighs.
Glenn Buttkus February 2010
Listed as #23 over on Magpie Tales 62
Would you like to hear the Author read this poem to you?
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
11 comments:
I like it, very descriptive. More on the edge than the one from your patio.
Peter
Glenn,
Nice poem, nice seduction in the title, lovely and wet.-- David
Did you create this recently? Seems like I have seen this before...regardless, well done!
Take care, Bud
Glenn,
Thanks again my wonderful friend.
You have definitely done it again!!
I love this passionate and earthy work of art!
I experience through your creativity the lusty connection to all life and the yearnings.
I feel for deeper awareness, that's provided.
Wow, I am amazed!
I am so glad you were born!
I am so glad I have gotten to know you!
I am so glad you share yourself so fully.
I go back and read again - even a part - gives me a spirit boost.
I love the title!!!
Dick
Glen: I love the energy in this, the way image builds upon image, and how the language feels very fresh. I feel as if I'm being asked to see rain for the first time. A few queries: Not sure about the title. It made me think it was going to be a persona poem,but it's not in the voice of Jehovah? Is it? I also wondered what function the 'I' plays in the poem as a whole? As, for me, the power of the poem is in the description and there's only one other return to the first person ('my constant companion') if I've read this carefully enough. I think I'd also like to see the poem in longer lines and with less 'air' (i.e. stanza breaks), just to see how it reads and feels. And finally, perhaps it could be a bit shorter? After the sexual imagery (when we reach 'compliant sky') perhaps the poem is stretching itself just a little too much? But I do still like this a lot.
Lynne
Wild and wild.
Love the descriptive nature evolving... right there on the edge of wet.
Energetic and edgy --- clever work.
Very wild and wonderful!
I'm home tomorrow night if you want to discuss politics...
Anna :o]
wow, this just spills and captivates
Vivid cavalcade of imagery and ideas. Excellent stuff.
Post a Comment