tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post1962877061508380166..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Down to the JukeGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-39132819338519845882020-07-19T12:29:50.956-07:002020-07-19T12:29:50.956-07:00Wonderful, sultry, bluesy blues. Great opening lin...Wonderful, sultry, bluesy blues. Great opening line. I had an image of the juke joint in The Color Purple in my head while I was reading this.Merril D. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07208799388236948565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-83036880412163254502020-07-14T13:35:21.918-07:002020-07-14T13:35:21.918-07:00Loved the vision it painted, especially as now I h...Loved the vision it painted, especially as now I have, after the meet, in my head, my version of Glenns' voice telling it to me in raspy HunterThompsonian attitude, that suits the poem to a tee! (is that a saying? "to a tee"? to a ... fist in the eye, Blues and whisky, deep drunken talks on long summer nights!)Anthony Borderlineshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06551627078409413908noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-74707919162620060572020-07-14T12:33:32.769-07:002020-07-14T12:33:32.769-07:00Breath
Of Dance
Hall Days
Covid-19-Blues
Suffocati...Breath<br />Of Dance<br />Hall Days<br />Covid-19-Blues<br />Suffocating<br />Forever<br />Now<br />More<br />Crows Raven<br />Wings Still <br />Dance Free<br />Summer Blue <br />Skies Seeing<br />Dog Days SinGinG<br />See Ya Retrograde Mars..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-51560370577875918472020-07-14T10:50:10.018-07:002020-07-14T10:50:10.018-07:00Oh you set it up so well in that first stanza....a...Oh you set it up so well in that first stanza....and then Miss Saphire....whew! You went all sultry and I'm swingin with the music sippin' my gin right with those sailors! GREAT job! :)lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-10914409955234429062020-07-14T07:27:08.819-07:002020-07-14T07:27:08.819-07:00I can feel the heat of the moment in this.I can feel the heat of the moment in this.Ken Gierkehttps://rivrvlogr.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-26941222407479677642020-07-13T22:37:51.377-07:002020-07-13T22:37:51.377-07:00Very clever, all those blue shades in your poem
M...Very clever, all those blue shades in your poem<br /><br />Much💙loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-62847382959562848792020-07-13T17:38:27.522-07:002020-07-13T17:38:27.522-07:00This one reminded me of Linda Rondstat's Blue ...This one reminded me of Linda Rondstat's Blue Bayou!Dwight L. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07992133580674047782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-87072637440120456172020-07-13T17:00:23.572-07:002020-07-13T17:00:23.572-07:00Sounds like you cavorted at Miss Saphire's in ...Sounds like you cavorted at Miss Saphire's in the good old days! Happy memories!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-39723441471976473072020-07-13T16:16:16.237-07:002020-07-13T16:16:16.237-07:00Quite the blue rainbow. Quite the blue rainbow. Kerfehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14679460865016032660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-91927671676432428602020-07-13T16:12:07.755-07:002020-07-13T16:12:07.755-07:00You've created a steamy, sultry world in 44 wo...You've created a steamy, sultry world in 44 words. It makes me want to know more about this place and the characters who inhabit it. I like how you placed yourself in the midst of it.Jade Lihttps://tao-talk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-60951527698980161362020-07-13T15:17:04.337-07:002020-07-13T15:17:04.337-07:00This makes me want to go down to the Juke.
Wonderf...This makes me want to go down to the Juke.<br />Wonderful!Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04026707232212719793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-68536466846808480882020-07-13T15:02:55.168-07:002020-07-13T15:02:55.168-07:00Yep. NAILED it. Yep. NAILED it. Ron. Lavalettehttps://rlavalette.wordpress.com/2020/07/13/the-poets-lunch-break/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-14313017231533560992020-07-13T14:00:14.399-07:002020-07-13T14:00:14.399-07:00Wonderful, sensual shades of blue in this one!💝 I...Wonderful, sensual shades of blue in this one!💝 I love; "Sailors in blue jumpers, pound the planks." Happy Eighth dVerse Anniversary, Glenn 😃Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-6089392513865019502020-07-13T13:42:15.562-07:002020-07-13T13:42:15.562-07:00A wonderous riff on the Blues motiff! You nailed i...A wonderous riff on the Blues motiff! You nailed it, Glenn!Frank J. Tassonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11034177573832896440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-11613047402992621262020-07-13T13:38:26.530-07:002020-07-13T13:38:26.530-07:00Good writing, Glenn. Sultry & sweating. Good s...Good writing, Glenn. Sultry & sweating. Good stuff!Susanhttps://theabjectmuse.menoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-23101080258663122552020-07-13T13:34:53.029-07:002020-07-13T13:34:53.029-07:00Gotta love a tribute to the blues. Nice one.Gotta love a tribute to the blues. Nice one.AnotherFearlessYear.nethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11189052349065089513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-6817130682469449292020-07-13T13:30:04.243-07:002020-07-13T13:30:04.243-07:00I love the shades of blue Glenn. You captured the...I love the shades of blue Glenn. You captured the setting and mood of the place.Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-80574607761740971852020-07-13T13:20:00.671-07:002020-07-13T13:20:00.671-07:00I love that opening phrase!I love that opening phrase!Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-2919995271692642492020-07-13T13:08:12.005-07:002020-07-13T13:08:12.005-07:00I see you took some blue inspiration from Picasso,...I see you took some blue inspiration from Picasso, Glenn! I love the opening lines; they took me right there to the bayou - and Sapphire’s. Cobalt is one of my favourite blue tones, not so much sapphire, it’s too pale, and navy blue just reminds me of school uniform!Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.com