tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post3561781855995557965..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Blackthorne--Scene Twenty-FiveGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-9605749883849766292014-04-02T11:19:35.401-07:002014-04-02T11:19:35.401-07:00just so admire this series, Glenn. ~just so admire this series, Glenn. ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-37176081184415532232014-03-30T18:52:52.052-07:002014-03-30T18:52:52.052-07:00Love the sound cues and camera views. They anchor ...Love the sound cues and camera views. They anchor me to the story and make it more immersive.author.nara.malonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07159847596372441526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-12408738096100409742014-03-30T13:46:55.415-07:002014-03-30T13:46:55.415-07:00My first time to read a Cinemagenic. And haven...My first time to read a Cinemagenic. And haven't read or seen a Western in years. Enjoyed your poem.Sabra Bowershttp://sabrabowers.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-9684568146145392292014-03-30T13:03:37.527-07:002014-03-30T13:03:37.527-07:00This snippet of cinemagnetic has me scrambling to ...This snippet of cinemagnetic has me scrambling to read the other installments! The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-9349699739261603822014-03-30T11:58:51.179-07:002014-03-30T11:58:51.179-07:00One of the things striking me in this scene is how...One of the things striking me in this scene is how well you write dialogue. I recall reading advice about writing a novel suggesting that we dip into screen-writing to help develop that skill. <br /><br />Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-92122037234438738722014-03-30T11:38:23.140-07:002014-03-30T11:38:23.140-07:00No, I have worked on some Indie film projects, wri...No, I have worked on some Indie film projects, writing the screenplays, but they never came to fruition. A "?real" screenplay is a bare bones outline to be put into the creative hands of a director & production time. I break all the literary rules with this Cinemagenic form of poetry, tread on new ground, where I am director, producer, writer, actor, musician, sound man, & cinematographer; such hubris for sure. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-48552710175081594072014-03-30T09:57:43.829-07:002014-03-30T09:57:43.829-07:00I liked the line: this ain't the town you left...I liked the line: this ain't the town you left - your roots are dead and gone <br /><br />that really hit home.<br /><br />Have you had a screen play published ? This seems like it could work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-67046510188813753042014-03-30T02:55:34.675-07:002014-03-30T02:55:34.675-07:00and all the while i was thinking the barber's ...and all the while i was thinking the barber's going to do something with the razor..ha..Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-76687757060126976932014-03-30T00:34:15.198-07:002014-03-30T00:34:15.198-07:00I am totally lost here, the screenplay format was ...I am totally lost here, the screenplay format was too condensed for my eyes, so I tried to listen, but max volume on the computer was insufficient for my old ears to detect any words. I wish you were here to read it for me.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-18348650182922950002014-03-29T21:59:12.344-07:002014-03-29T21:59:12.344-07:00Love your detailed account of an old western scene...Love your detailed account of an old western scene, Glenn. Buck better watch himself...home town boy or not! Great scene set-ups with the camera angles/shots and music too...fun to read.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-44908952387363310262014-03-29T17:45:03.191-07:002014-03-29T17:45:03.191-07:00Glenn - I am always astonished by your detail and ...Glenn - I am always astonished by your detail and depth of storytelling in each of these 'installments' - wonderful! KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-54551811709680582312014-03-29T17:16:46.343-07:002014-03-29T17:16:46.343-07:00What a show!What a show!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-79323539235976217732014-03-29T15:42:22.178-07:002014-03-29T15:42:22.178-07:00Ah.. this I have been waiting for a long time.. an...Ah.. this I have been waiting for a long time.. and still you leave me hanging there in the end... whatever did the mutt see. But i reckon Buck has more steel yet.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-37519198692830802422014-03-29T14:19:42.047-07:002014-03-29T14:19:42.047-07:00I've been missing these installments as well.....I've been missing these installments as well... Love the new setting in the barbershop, learning a bit more about the man behind the gruff exterior, I always knew Buck would turn out to be a deep well.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-43078401000199019972014-03-29T13:47:04.225-07:002014-03-29T13:47:04.225-07:00This was fun to read I always enjoy a good story w...This was fun to read I always enjoy a good story with inserts of music..Buck: I'm not a stranger..Barnes: so you say..will he be escorted out of town..stay tuned for trouble is on it's way...Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-69336324219768932332014-03-29T13:18:34.685-07:002014-03-29T13:18:34.685-07:00I am impressed by your creativity and dedication, ...I am impressed by your creativity and dedication, Glenn! I wonder who you'd like to cast if you were shooting Blackthorne.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-48358221005319875622014-03-29T12:40:29.151-07:002014-03-29T12:40:29.151-07:00Another cinempoetic classic in the making. >KBAnother cinempoetic classic in the making. >KBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-84227950452242443622014-03-29T12:29:28.858-07:002014-03-29T12:29:28.858-07:00I feel like I need to catch up on a huge amount of...I feel like I need to catch up on a huge amount of work here, Glenn! It's so rich and creative!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-36856690153148770842014-03-29T11:53:26.863-07:002014-03-29T11:53:26.863-07:00Ha, I think Buck is right...there will be trouble ...Ha, I think Buck is right...there will be trouble heading his way. There always IS. Enjoyed this continuation, Glenn.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-40057401061005623422014-03-29T11:23:45.323-07:002014-03-29T11:23:45.323-07:00barbers and easy girls - they always hear a lot of...barbers and easy girls - they always hear a lot of what's going on in a town... quiet listeners... somehow i'm mondo fascinated by the barber.. ha.. cool story telling glenn...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-55192246681471450862014-03-29T09:54:57.603-07:002014-03-29T09:54:57.603-07:00here we go1 smiles...nice way to fill in some back...here we go1 smiles...nice way to fill in some back story...you've set it up nicely...i have missed this series man...and i am looking forward to my monthly installments now like i used to my comic books....great scene...i like the barber and that he has an inkling it might be a set up but is willing to talk any way...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com