tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post4924251666282080949..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Blackthorne--a 55Glenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-2052578964957650712014-07-28T22:11:00.246-07:002014-07-28T22:11:00.246-07:00cool. you've distilled and yet whetted the app...cool. you've distilled and yet whetted the appetite for more ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-16372851807857535902014-07-28T12:28:43.850-07:002014-07-28T12:28:43.850-07:00I am pleased to have personality. I'd better s...I am pleased to have personality. I'd better start working on that cash. <br /><br />The scene has me wanting to read more. You've set it with great detail and I'm curious about the daughter. Well done.Beth Winterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00123202473118521429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-11078585585255298942014-07-28T07:02:10.195-07:002014-07-28T07:02:10.195-07:00interesting...a departure from how you usually han...interesting...a departure from how you usually handle this...almost like a catch up point for people...his daughter...i am intrigued...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-22562735831305397272014-07-28T02:19:09.154-07:002014-07-28T02:19:09.154-07:00I love the quote - although I'm not quite sure...I love the quote - although I'm not quite sure how it relates to the poem. But I like the succinct, tight little character sketches here, very different from your usual widescreen format!Marina Sofiahttp://findingtimetowrite.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-37032569511185444542014-07-27T22:37:53.460-07:002014-07-27T22:37:53.460-07:00This feels like a tightly-written recap. I love th...This feels like a tightly-written recap. I love this story and can't wait for the next installment.The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-36993698460335117132014-07-27T18:46:21.331-07:002014-07-27T18:46:21.331-07:00Hi Glen,
Interesting character development, I was...Hi Glen,<br /><br />Interesting character development, I was expecting an epic tale here..I will wait for the next installment. Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-32486438853317933672014-07-27T17:13:45.731-07:002014-07-27T17:13:45.731-07:00Am smiling at the quote! Too bad I didnt lay aside...Am smiling at the quote! Too bad I didnt lay aside more cash, hee hee! I enjoyed the poem, too!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-72729196374745270572014-07-27T16:40:00.077-07:002014-07-27T16:40:00.077-07:00Love these snippets of your characters - so filled...Love these snippets of your characters - so filled with drama - wonderful KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-56780514697856346642014-07-27T13:47:41.018-07:002014-07-27T13:47:41.018-07:00You sure can cover a lot of territory in 55 little...You sure can cover a lot of territory in 55 little words and so entertaining too. Thanks for the homage to G-man...miss those days with him.Gayle Walters Rosenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-23538929824464406632014-07-27T13:38:03.612-07:002014-07-27T13:38:03.612-07:00surrounded by those men, she's going to be qui...surrounded by those men, she's going to be quite a character.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-58097394060819161062014-07-27T10:24:17.623-07:002014-07-27T10:24:17.623-07:00I like the interesting quote you shared at the beg...I like the interesting quote you shared at the beginning.Never had read that before. And what for those pushing 55 with no money, I wonder. All downhill for us I guess! Your storyline to date has been quite intriguing, I must say.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-70417043139034338032014-07-27T08:38:12.052-07:002014-07-27T08:38:12.052-07:00Wow.. very intriguing. I love the characters.. wan...Wow.. very intriguing. I love the characters.. want to know more of the daughter yet undescribed...Madhurahttp://meetmissmoody.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-4529491596041428302014-07-27T08:23:28.114-07:002014-07-27T08:23:28.114-07:00Love this Glenn. I want to know what happens to Ro...Love this Glenn. I want to know what happens to Rod Buck. And I'm looking forward to this undescribed daughter. We learned so much about these characters in so little space. Great writing as always.<br /><br />Cheers,<br />MikeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-24929402800500823032014-07-27T01:28:17.061-07:002014-07-27T01:28:17.061-07:00Perceptive and quite interesting how life is playe...Perceptive and quite interesting how life is played out by actors in a play, very classical. Nicely done, alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-81452440722991029142014-07-26T17:44:19.217-07:002014-07-26T17:44:19.217-07:00Great concise character vignettes....and the last ...Great concise character vignettes....and the last line is a powerful foreshadowing that inspires curiosity in the reader.C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-812345875311470632014-07-26T14:30:42.651-07:002014-07-26T14:30:42.651-07:00I must read a very good English novel which just l...I must read a very good English novel which just lacked what you presented us with: a brief list of the characters involved and their characteristics. Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-51540221254734663822014-07-26T13:20:14.741-07:002014-07-26T13:20:14.741-07:00Wow, tight and flavorful - and leaves me wanting m...Wow, tight and flavorful - and leaves me wanting more! And that daughter...which of Sophie Tucker's demographics does she fall under?Bridge2visionhttp://bridge2vision.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-71357569660056391272014-07-26T13:08:36.187-07:002014-07-26T13:08:36.187-07:00You really have left us in suspense once again, Gl...You really have left us in suspense once again, Glenn! I like the short glimpse of each character & can hardly wait to meet the daughter. Smiles.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-55194218965101997402014-07-26T13:02:54.620-07:002014-07-26T13:02:54.620-07:00A great condensation of the story up till now. I ...A great condensation of the story up till now. I miss writing.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-18592581977172080132014-07-26T12:41:50.729-07:002014-07-26T12:41:50.729-07:00Complete - very compact and telling. A tragedy tol...Complete - very compact and telling. A tragedy told in 55. Mighty fancy writing, sir! Liked it alot!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-87603106280031501252014-07-26T12:23:25.264-07:002014-07-26T12:23:25.264-07:00Well..first of all so true but sad in the words of...Well..first of all so true but sad in the words of wisdom that start..and from the sound of the parenting arrangements and reality.. of the daughter...<br /><br />she may need some good fortune 2..:)<br /><br />but anyway..hope you enjoy! your dVerse adventure today..!Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-12692580603419847292014-07-26T12:23:15.169-07:002014-07-26T12:23:15.169-07:00Great little character sketches here, Glenn. Makes...Great little character sketches here, Glenn. Makes one want to know what's going to happen next. And as for Sophie Tucker's saying...what can I say? Bring on the $--we're remodeling!Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-51288958786938472902014-07-26T12:14:04.061-07:002014-07-26T12:14:04.061-07:00Glenn, a great story played out in a slimness of l...Glenn, a great story played out in a slimness of language takes on many suppositions and grows fatter in the imagination. >KBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-13530085950578064892014-07-26T12:10:13.055-07:002014-07-26T12:10:13.055-07:00a little character development here... concise... ...a little character development here... concise... you must be busy... LOL, nice to see another style of your writing.Wolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-85103619301481865812014-07-26T10:47:06.458-07:002014-07-26T10:47:06.458-07:00Tight write Glenn as I was expecting your usual ci...Tight write Glenn as I was expecting your usual cinematic approach ~ Looking forward to the next chapter ~<br /><br />Happy weekend to you~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.com