tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post6050351423446653604..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: It Takes TwoGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-27190806552844677622019-08-14T12:23:11.233-07:002019-08-14T12:23:11.233-07:00Oh I love how you turned it around and reached the...Oh I love how you turned it around and reached the same conclusion in the end... night can do miracles.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-55095659042163704452019-08-14T00:07:04.336-07:002019-08-14T00:07:04.336-07:00thank you for joining in -your converse of the ori...thank you for joining in -your converse of the original inspiration works beautifully with that change over and resolution in each third line <br />"Two bodies back to back<br />shift to face to face,<br />and the night turns to treacle. "<br />Yummy!Laura Bloomsburyhttps://poetrypix.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-83729682898899933862019-08-13T23:19:42.734-07:002019-08-13T23:19:42.734-07:00I love that the bodies are back to back in your po...I love that the bodies are back to back in your poem, Glenn, and the lines:<br />‘…sometimes just two spines;<br />at night they unite’;<br />the rhyming in:<br />‘…ready to celebrate;<br />but at night they separate’;<br />and the final stanza – treacle is perfect!<br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-31879495176914553232019-08-13T19:08:19.679-07:002019-08-13T19:08:19.679-07:00I love your contrast in this poem. It is how it wo...I love your contrast in this poem. It is how it works sometimes in relationships. Well done!!Dwight L. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07992133580674047782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-33406238182376335552019-08-13T16:20:19.546-07:002019-08-13T16:20:19.546-07:00Beautifully done Glenn! We chose the same poem. Yo...Beautifully done Glenn! We chose the same poem. You stayed true to the poem in your interpretation — I went into lustful orbit, using only a suggestion from each of the Paz 5 verses to inform mine: ocean, desert, roots, steel (knife), and stars. :-)robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-35895847520462717022019-08-13T14:48:06.878-07:002019-08-13T14:48:06.878-07:00I like Gibran's quoted thoughts on love. I ha...I like Gibran's quoted thoughts on love. I had hoped for passion and romance when the two turned face to face. I'm still dealing with treacle!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-72312215911352113622019-08-13T14:22:36.299-07:002019-08-13T14:22:36.299-07:00Glenn, I like your repetitions, shifts, and rhymes...Glenn, I like your repetitions, shifts, and rhymes. Wonderful relatiionship study!Jade Lihttp://tao-talk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-28874915290043964652019-08-13T14:13:34.506-07:002019-08-13T14:13:34.506-07:00Beautiful, love the intro quote by Khalil too.Beautiful, love the intro quote by Khalil too.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08703979117197750853noreply@blogger.com