tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post7819908508193900941..comments2024-01-26T13:12:55.520-08:00Comments on Feel Free to Read: Trumpeting the CoronationGlenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-12336078194970045442017-01-23T08:05:45.707-08:002017-01-23T08:05:45.707-08:00VERY late to the reading....but surely not disappo...VERY late to the reading....but surely not disappointed at all with your use of repetition here. VERY glad my daughter and I were with 100,000+ on Boston's Commons on the 21st....joined by millions of women (and men and children) across the GLOBE...to celebrate hope and resolve and denounce bigotry and hate and narcissism and misogyny and etc etc etc. <br />Two favorite posters I saw (among so many many amazing ones):<br /><br />WOMEN HAVE 2020 VISION<br />and<br />EVEN IKEA HAS BETTER CABINETS<br /><br />I especially liked in your post here, "battalions of billionaires and bubble head blondes"....fearful to write I "liked this" as it is horrific in its content, right? Surreal. Isn't there a song that includes the lyrics "I will survive." Yet I fear there are many many who will suffer greatly in the next four years and sadly, many many of those are the very ones who bought his grade school level rhetoric that promised they could have the Brooklyn Bridge for a reasonable price. <br />Excellent words here.<br />We must somehow hang on. <br />I'm waiting for you to write something that deals with "alternate realities" and/or alternate facts. Your pen could do it justice, that's for sure! :)<br />Happy Monday, my friend. I am so glad I found you in this little space of cyberspace! :)lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-16434328907622498452017-01-21T13:27:54.178-08:002017-01-21T13:27:54.178-08:00i'm telling you....yesterday was emotionally s...i'm telling you....yesterday was emotionally sad for me. it was also sad for my country.<br />we are a joke now. a celebrity runs out country. i don't even know what to think.<br />your poem really depicts the reality though. great write.Stacy M.S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17768743830360856158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-90999554848853266802017-01-20T12:16:52.557-08:002017-01-20T12:16:52.557-08:00Oh! I stand with Victoria and Toni. I have hope....Oh! I stand with Victoria and Toni. I have hope....have to....how can we survive everyday if we don't? Write poetry...more poetry....poetisfy the world! We have fear, but we have been living in fear for a long while....since the Cold War, before and beyond. Time to pull up our Big Girl/Boy pants and do something positive for life and our country. Plant fruit trees, bushes, a garden....feed stray cats and dogs...adopt them....do something positive and don't hide behind the common fear. What comes will come but don't live in fear. YOur poem makes great usage of repetition....and I tend to agree with someone here (you?) that Trumps speeches are rattles of emptiness...but we have to make our Peace. And we will (speaking to you, Brother Bjorn) be allowed to write on. JaneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-473016615660023142017-01-20T11:37:35.846-08:002017-01-20T11:37:35.846-08:00Definitely trumps the Trump in rhetoric power... I...Definitely trumps the Trump in rhetoric power... I think we have no choice but to survive. But the world will be different tomorrow. Hopefully we will be allowed to write at least.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-37642719183766514872017-01-20T07:55:16.233-08:002017-01-20T07:55:16.233-08:00A fine rant Sir. I fear for the world today. I rea...A fine rant Sir. I fear for the world today. I really do.Time to roll up our sleeves.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-51286917832792467492017-01-20T04:49:07.042-08:002017-01-20T04:49:07.042-08:00I have no more tears to shed. I have herds of fear...I have no more tears to shed. I have herds of fears to leash, I have buckets of regrets to calm, I have dreams to vanquish.. sigh.. you voice both fears and hopes! Excellent write.Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-84900814894500733322017-01-19T23:13:23.772-08:002017-01-19T23:13:23.772-08:00I remember analysing political speeches when I was...I remember analysing political speeches when I was studying linguistics and repetition was right up at the top of political rhetorical devices. In every speech I have heard him make, Trump repeats himself with little or no effect - he has no idea of rhetoric. Your repetition of name was so effective, Glenn! Tat name not only makes me shudder with fear but also with revulsion. The title was clever - he really does like to blow his own trumpet! With his hairstye, his grimaces and the way he 'tweets vitriol, racism, sexism & lies' anyone with any kind of vision can see that he is has fascist leanings. You've expressed the feelings of people all over the world with the final repetitions:<br />'I have no more tears to shed.<br />I have herds of fears to leash,<br />I have buckets of regrets to calm,<br />I have dreams to vanquish, and<br />I have future nightmares to experience'.<br />God help us!<br /><br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-75197888669350687292017-01-19T19:33:34.402-08:002017-01-19T19:33:34.402-08:00Colorful repeating and hyperbole. I wish you peace...Colorful repeating and hyperbole. I wish you peacePleasant Streethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00060701245925637719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-47811756683259479392017-01-19T19:24:51.720-08:002017-01-19T19:24:51.720-08:00Hail to the grief. Sanity still may be out there ...Hail to the grief. Sanity still may be out there somewhere, perhaps hiding for nowWaltermarkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619428258264938946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-67527772007484254172017-01-19T18:27:36.795-08:002017-01-19T18:27:36.795-08:00Strong message mad stronger through repetition !Strong message mad stronger through repetition !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-38261260870128325872017-01-19T17:33:28.842-08:002017-01-19T17:33:28.842-08:00At first I wasn't going to read this because I...At first I wasn't going to read this because I have read enough about the man and he hasn't even been sworn it yet. But I did find this poem powerful and hopeful at the same time. Well written. Arcadia Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02632127814188649845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-41845421480105079952017-01-19T15:03:35.307-08:002017-01-19T15:03:35.307-08:00Excellent rant, Sir (repetition always serves rant...Excellent rant, Sir (repetition always serves rant well.) I, too, choose hope. And prayer. Lots and lots of prayer. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-41447758488018242492017-01-19T14:34:36.010-08:002017-01-19T14:34:36.010-08:00As if joe bite-me is an authority on knowing anyth...As if joe bite-me is an authority on knowing anything except how to be foul mouthed. But I agree with Victoria...i am hopeful. I love how you beat us over the head with Trumptrumptrump. Good use of a rant. I think weneed more hope rather than so much negativity. We need more beat poets to stand up and demand that we make love, not make Trump. Trump won. Move on and work with us to defeat defeatism. It's a funny poem and gave me a huge laugh and a grin. Beat us over the head Glenn, but don't beat us down. Be the beat poet you truly are and set us all straight, but don't take away our faith in the American people.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6327165758377801408.post-4828021467669111912017-01-19T14:02:33.615-08:002017-01-19T14:02:33.615-08:00Repetition in a political rant is really effective...Repetition in a political rant is really effective and I think this is a tool you use with ease. For myself, I choose to be hope-full. I think the extremes you see from Trump are how he positions himself to negotiate and he is a negotiator. We have got to come together. We've got to! (Note, repetition).Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com