Tuesday, August 24, 2010

Mariner Urbanus


"Mariner" by H. Hamampour


Mariner Urbanus

Sunk to the eyes
in billowy bubbles and epidermal brine,
lying languid and long amidships
in my ancient porcelain bath tub
whose brass dragon’s feet
perched like clawed fists
at each smooth white rounded corner
on a trivet of rough-edged bricks,
stained tangerine orange
and melon yellow
after ages of sediment had dripped
hotly onto their exposed flanks,
all atop a copper meshed grate
where the soupy overspill
of old skin, garden soil, and concrete dust
could flow down searching
for the fellow pipes and portals
of other drains, and lustfully mingle
with the rainbow rivulets of run off
from strangers, mysterious women,
crippled mailmen, dogs,
and a black five-foot boa constrictor
we knew Ames kept on the second floor--
I felt at absolute One with the sea
within, gleaming with salt particles
at the sub-atomic level, and the body
of ocean only blocks distant, and even
the gushing of my own blood pumped
around the meat engine that housed me;
submerged yet afloat,
weightless yet powerful,
a captain, a titan, a Mer-man,
staring into the blank face
of the tub troll, with the pewter faucet
as proboscis, and my own toes
as misshapen wrist digits, he
who always attended me
and accompanied me
on my daily sailings.

Glenn Buttkus August 2010

To be posted as well on Magpie Tales 28

16 comments:

  1. Wonderful sail, Mer-man! My favorite line is "gushing of my own blood pumped around the meat engine that housed me". Lots of great textures here. Welcome to Magpie Tales!

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  2. Well, you are now going to show the magpies how it's done, are you?
    There'll be another one very soon.

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  3. Hello Glenn,
    Just found your blog by way of Frico's. I've added to blogs I follow (hope you don't mind) and looking forward to reading old and new.

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  4. Me, again. I just read your comment left at Magpie Tales. Just hang tight, because a new photo prompt is posted every Thursday.

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  5. I love this! Such terrific imagery...
    and I love baths, too :-)

    Thank you, dear man.

    Your fan,
    Kelp girl

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  6. '...run off
    from strangers, mysterious women,
    crippled mailmen, dogs,
    and a black five-foot boa constrictor
    we knew Ames kept on the second floor--'

    OMG! I hope you never suffer a backwash!
    So graphic... the thinking-working Merman's grime removal tub.

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  7. Hey Jimmy:

    Welcome to my site, and of course
    and I am pleased you want to link
    to my site. You may post any of
    my poems that interest you as
    well. I have never been to Scotland
    in this life, but oddly I get a lot
    of deju vu when I see films showing
    the countryside, so perhaps I lived
    there in a previous lifetime.

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  8. I love your site(s), and am grateful
    to Friko for hooking up my introduction
    to you and your workshop.

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  9. Former comment was for "Willow".
    Welcome Stafford. I love that other
    Magpies feel free to comment.
    It is kind of exciting.

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  10. Holy Smokes! That blows me away. Such talent!

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  11. Thank you River-Rose. Nice to meet you.
    Drop by anytime, or check me out on
    Magpie, since I hope to contribute
    more weekly.

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  12. I too will follow. Great imagery and wonderful choice of words.

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  13. WOW!!... absolutely blinking FANTASTIC!!!!

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  14. Welcome Kristen and Deborah; not used to
    such traffic over here on my esoteric and
    usually very quiet site. MAGPIE might
    alter the very essence of my site.
    Cool.

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  15. Glenn,
    What fun you have sudsing in your lusty tub! The meat engine round which the heat pumps has a
    very porno vibration to it. It's a salty slosh of sensual verse your imagination bathed in that
    day. Quite funfilled images!

    David

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  16. Thank you Glenn,
    That is generous of you in your welcome and in your offer for me to post something of yours.
    Much appreciated.

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