Loved this section, Glenn:"in the bestial almond chamber of my fevered mind,the dun smoke clouds carob-drenched"Excellent poem.rosemarymint.wordpress.com
This was freaking fantastic!
I'm back for another reading, and now this is my favorite part:"its violet pulsingaura just beginning to emerge"Death and rebirth are fascinating concepts. Of course, there are a few varied applications for this poem and its masterfully woven meanings.~Shawnarosemarymint.wordpress.com
Wow--your description is so thick--I really like the alliteration, "disheveled disturbed" and "stalwart stamen" especially. And the last line is simply wonderful.
Excellent write. The first stanza is incredible.
Violent and gritty and excellent. Lots of hard sounds. Echoes of your epic "Love Hurts".
Another unique weaving of Shawna's words. Enjoyed it.
Loved this section, Glenn:
ReplyDelete"in the bestial almond chamber
of my fevered mind,
the dun smoke clouds carob-drenched"
Excellent poem.
rosemarymint.wordpress.com
This was freaking fantastic!
ReplyDeleteI'm back for another reading, and now this is my favorite part:
ReplyDelete"its violet pulsing
aura just beginning to emerge"
Death and rebirth are fascinating concepts. Of course, there are a few varied applications for this poem and its masterfully woven meanings.
~Shawna
rosemarymint.wordpress.com
Wow--your description is so thick--I really like the alliteration, "disheveled disturbed" and "stalwart stamen" especially. And the last line is simply wonderful.
ReplyDeleteExcellent write. The first stanza is incredible.
ReplyDeleteViolent and gritty and excellent. Lots of hard sounds. Echoes of your epic "Love Hurts".
ReplyDeleteAnother unique weaving of Shawna's words. Enjoyed it.
ReplyDelete