Friday, March 9, 2012

Zorba's Advice


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Zorba’s Advice

the fifth troilet

“When a woman sleeps alone,
It puts a shame on all men.”
you must love her to the bone
If a woman sleeps alone,
you must seek to hear her moan,
be the rooster to her hen;
If a woman sleeps alone,
It puts a shame on all men.


Glenn Buttkus

March 2012

Listed as #51 over at dVerse Poets-FFA-Triolets

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10 comments:

  1. Ha,this is clever and witty.I also subscribe to the view that men's purpose in life is to pleasure women:)

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  2. I, too, subscribe to the view that men's purpose in life is to pleasure women!

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  3. we are nothing but tools for their pleasure...but you wont hear me complain...

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  4. Me too, me too! A very clever triolet.

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  5. You've got quite a handle on the triolet now! You could probably do this in your sleep!

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  6. nice ... reminds me of Bryan Adams song, "Have you Ever Really Loved a Woman?" both of our daughters - grown and married now, insisted that the men they went out with had to know this song before they would consider getting serious with them ... nice ...

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  7. Smile, nice inspiration for this Selkie story I'm strugging to write.

    Fun triolet.

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  8. Ditto Cressida and Mama Zen.
    Nothing else to say.

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  9. Very good triolet, lol, and I'll join the Cressida-Zen choir!

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