Thursday, August 30, 2018

Black and Blues




painting by Dusty Jonakin.


Black and Blues

“I never had the blues--no, the blues
always had me.”--Brownie McGhee.

You know they say
that a black snake moans
when it hears a mess
of thumping, banging blues.

Purists, piously munching pieces
of pigeon pot pie, would argue
that a snake can only hiss--

but I would be remiss
not to strongly disagree,
for when that silver slide bar zings
along those six cat gut strings, 
I tell you 

that old black snake moans,
like a gambler shaking his bones,
like ice cream without its cones,
like a scream the bitch actually owns,
like punks without their phones,
like a blade a thug will hone--
it just coils there all alone,
bobs its head back 
and damned sure moans;

joined by a hound dog howling,
and a tomcat screeching,
and a church mouse praying,
and a harnessed horse haranguing!

Hell’s fire,
you know it’s true--
banging blues always
does that to you.



Glenn Buttkus

Posted over at dVerse Poets Pub

14 comments:

brudberg said...

I love the music in this and I could hear the guitar in this... love the thought of a snake doing so much more than a hiss. This must have been fun to write.

Victoria Stuart said...

Hell's fire, I do know it's true. I love how you just grab me and take me into the music. The pious munching pigeon pie who just don't get it. It feels like you wrote this with so much soul!

jo said...


This is wonderfully musical!

Frank Hubeny said...

I'm convinced it does with this line: "damned sure moans"

Mary Hood said...

The superfluous effects of music can make any do the unexpected and unprecedented.. That Blake snake most probably moans.

De Jackson said...

I love that ripcord-tight last stanza, especially!

Unknown said...

This is genius, Glenn, and I feel just like that black snake - moaning with pleasure.

Dwight L. Roth said...

It has got to be pretty good banging blues to make a black snake moan!!

Truedessa said...

You know I just love this Glenn! ha - and the black cats moan to the blues and perhaps some moves ;)

sarah said...

This is down and dirty, demands late night whiskey and a side order of rhythm.

Kim M. Russell said...

This one oozes the blues, Glenn! While I was reading it, all I could hear in my head was Ry Cooder. You've created a medley of onomatopoeia and alliteration. I love:
'...when that silver slide bar zings
along those six cat gut strings'
and there's a touch of Bob Dylan in:
'that old black snake moans,
like a gambler shaking his bones,
like ice cream without its cones,
like a scream the bitch actually owns,
like punks without their phones...'

lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.com said...

“Banging blues always does that to you.” 😊
Love the jazzy blues sounds evoked here - and the images. This reminds me of my favorite poem of all time by Carl Sandburg Jazz Man ... the trombone is in it and a wonderful line “sling your knuckles...”. Do google it if you’ve not read it. Your poem really evokes his feel😊🎼🎷

Kim Glover said...

This is remarkable; you've made the music come alive with so many incredible metaphors. And I love the rhyming scheme - your poem reads like lyrics and someone should read it aloud with an 8-bar blues behind it.

Debi Swim said...

that old black snake moans,
like a gambler shaking his bones,
it just coils there all alone,
bobs its head back
and damned sure moans;.... I couldn't tell you why but I really love this