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The City Stirs
“Nature is a petrified magic city.”--Novalis
Sirens awaken me alltissmo & blaring;
perhaps a meat wagon, the police,
or a firetruck-- charging
toward some calamity, deliberate and
bellicoso.
A canto of pigeons coo on the edge of
the roof, all dolce & delicato--quite the
contrast to my Mickey Mouse alarm
clock blasting its brassy bell aria. I silence
it with a swift colpugno.
Foghorns in the harbor
bleat abafando in the
distance. My tongue tastes metallic as
I burp pepperoni pizza, greasy
and abbandono.
Some truck with twin
stacks bellows & spews
as it labors through its
crunching chorus of gears, before
fading con calando.
As I brew coffee,
needing to consume
caffeine devoto, I tap
my fingers to the onerous
barbaro beat of a twin jackhammer
duet, busily reducing concrete to a
acciaccato dust pudding.
Mere blocks from the office, I move adante through
the´cacophony of the crowds crescendo, untouched,
nearly invisible, finding their frowns & epithets capricco,
the white noise within me fully abandono, but only in
the security of the elevator does my heartbeat return
to abattuta.
The city awakens
con allegrezza, as I
grasp joy in fermata.
Glenn Buttkus
14 comments:
Dang, this is fun, but I'm going to need to come back to research some of your music vocab, Glenn. You really created a lot of atmosphere here. So glad I'm mostly rural! You just gave me an idea for one I've yet to write!
Fun poem Glenn. Now I know why I ran screaming from the city!
Oh I love the way you've woven the music terms into your poem and created a soundscape of the city, Glenn! I particularly love: 'A canto of pigeons coo on the edge of /the roof, all dolce & delicato...'.
and
'Foghorns in the harbor
bleat abafando in the
distance. My tongue tastes metallic as
I burp pepperoni pizza, greasy
and abbandono'
and
'Mere blocks from the office, I move adante through
the´cacophony of the crowds crescendo...'
This is delightful. The fire engine charges... Red like the bull fighters cloak
Lovely imagery
I like the way the musicality of your day builds from adante to crescendo. "Mere blocks from the office, I move adante through
the´cacophony of the crowds crescendo, untouched,"
"grasp joy in fermata" - oh, perfect.
Gorgeous sprinkling of terms throughout, Glenn.
My goodness this is good!❤️ I can actually feel the city vibrating upon the beat of your verse. Excellent write!!
Wonderfully done Glenn, why am I not surprised at your use of musical language. Brilliant!
What a wonderful fun response... This got me thinking of Rhapsody in Blue, and the version don for Fantasia... yes the city has it's own music... maybe more Rock'n Roll than anything a symphony.
This is just stunning work, Glenn. Totally amazing.
What a wonderful cacophony! Glenn, I definitely think city music is your forte! LOVE it. BTW, I think it's "andante", not adante.
The musicality of the city brought to life. Wonderfully expressive and informative piece.
This is wonderful, Glenn...quite a romp through the musical terms...and I fell off my chair with what you did to your alarm clock. LOL! Brilliant, all of it.'
A great joy to read. Very descriptive.
Jane
I am very late to comment -- having spent the weekend at my daughter's and seeing my two young grandchildren in Phillips Academy's production of the Nutcracker!
So -- late -- but oh so impressed! This is masterful and is truly a symphony of the city. Love the fermata at the very last....and have always loved the musical term bellicose....
Really really enjoyed this. Read it a second time aloud -- and really heard the music! :)
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