image by Glenn Buttkus
Five Hematoma Deep
“One can find so many pains when the rain
is falling.”--John Steinbeck
It was a sparkling
Spring day. all fresh cut grass,
and squirrels playing tag.
Contrails from a jet speck
put white ruts in a ceylon sky.
I strolled out onto our deck.
Our family pooch, Taffy,
had passed months before.
Her old dog house
was still in the corner.
There was a handmade wooden sign,
carved by my youngest daughter,
nailed to it--TAFFY.
I decided to take a picture
of it for posterity.
I stepped back, and framed the shot.
Just as I snapped it,
a weak board I was standing on
broke, and my right leg
crashed down into the hole,
all the way to the thigh.
The gash was only as wide
as the 2X4 that had broken.
My leg was much wider.
It was jammed and stuck
in the smashed wood
and tiny orifice.
There was no one around,
so I tugged at it with all my strength.
Finally it came loose as tendons
and wood shards screamed.
The thigh muscle had a several inch wide divot
in it. It felt like a hungry troll was
gnawing on it.
An hour later, at the ER,
we found no wound, just contusion
and severe bruising. Unfortunately
what was unseen was the five
levels of hematoma lurking
below the skin. The next day
it became a profuse bleeding wound.
I set up shop at a wound clinic
for the next several months.
Finally I had to wear a wound pump
for a long week. It took seven months
to heal. The only positive thing
that came out of it was we built
a stronger, more modern covered deck,
and we enjoy it often.
I carry
a half inch
permanent divot
to remind me
of the ordeal.
Glenn Buttkus
Posted over at d'Verse Poet's Pub
10 comments:
This is very effective writing, Glenn. I felt every bit of this.
Oh my heart this is vivid! I agree with Ken here, such powerful writing that gives us a glimpse of the excruciating pain that you went through, Glenn. There are no doubt some things that we never forget. I could feel this too!
Woof. Sometimes I just can't agree with Rilke that we squander our hours of pain. What's to linger?
Shit dude! That whole experience sucked — damn! That may fall under the “what doesn’t kill us…” heading — but sorry brother! 😕
So horrible sounding where your flesh was essentially mashed. Thinking of the wound drainer ugh. Seven months is a long time to heal! Glad you kept your life and your leg, Glenn.
that's a hard road to a new deck...
What a frighteningly vivid tale of pain! This must have been a horrendous experience. Showing the actual photo which led to the injury really brings it home.
The transference here is very effecrive
"Finally it came loose as tendons
and wood shards screamed"
Much💜love
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Sorry... being very late catching up here... your description of the physical pain is very effective, but also how you tie it to the pain of a lost dog.
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