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Blackthorne
Cinemagenic 147
Ballet Of Beasts
“In May 2011 I posted this poem for OLN. Folks
were a bit perplexed by it. Perhaps today it can
be recognized as a poetic extension of the novel’s
denouement.”--Me.
Now he could see himself
landing lightly in a pool of quiet dust,
firing his pistol and his sawed-off
as he touched the ground,
dropping his guns immediately,
leaping back into the thick air,
lunging across a shaft of golden light,
as he heard hooves;
then he became hooves
pounding the hard packed earth,
millions of unshod hooves beating
against the face of the prairie;
then he was on the Appaloosa
and Johnny Eagle was on White Bob
galloping in the musky midst
of an angry ocean of humps and horns
a ballet of beasts dancing at quarter speed,
time condensed within the clenched fist
of that dangerous moment,
as massive muscles rippled slowly,
the undulating transfer of meat
into extreme slow-motion.
and soon a slower visual realm still
until flaring nostrils and panicked eyes
became frozen, just before
the cacophony of gunfire--
Sharps, Spencers, Winchesters and Colts,
their crackling crescendo washing over
the cries from the herd,
as that great horde of hair
began crashing into the tall grass
skidding in blood, breaking bones
as collisions piled up, and at the bottom
the leaders were dying
in a cataclysmic chorus of death songs,
and out of the blood mist runs Buck, on foot,
making long strides toward the purple
mountains, with bison death breath thick
and visceral, clinging sticky to his soul,
but not alone in the race, becoming a trio,
his father on one side of him,
and the Eagle on the other;
for a time they moved along together,
matching each other’s stride, running
as one six-legged creature
as the rifles barked on,
the running barely touching
the viscous viscus of cosmic pain,
rifle blasts still thundering in his tympanum
when he heard his patriarch fall, but
he did not slow or turn to the old man,
for he had to run on, pumping his arms,
the Hunter and the Eagle fleet as antelopes,
hip to hip, shoulder to shoulder, tearing
up clods as they sprinted, their faces blue,
their lungs aching, and then the Indian went
down, landing lightly like a fluttering feather,
a beautiful soft death. Buck’s eyes blazed
with tears as he ran on, his big hands reaching
for the distant mountains, pushing himself
until there was only the running, and
the running had no heart, no spirit, until
he was overcome with a terrible fatigue,
and the race for the red horizon faded,
as the murderous lightning of a thousand
rifle discharges rolled over him;
the guns went silent, and the sky became
a black funnel, his eyes lost their focus,
and his lungs turned to stone, so very
quiet as the reeds fluted the air,
and the grass hugged him farewell,
until he was full stop,
and he finally turned
to face the horns.
Glenn Buttkus
Posted over at d'Verse Poet's Pub
15 comments:
"Now he could see himself/landing lightly in a pool of quiet dust": those opening lines set the tone and I've never seen it done more brilliantly, Glenn, as all that comes after is like an elegy to Buck's spirit. We too become "so very quiet as the reeds that fluted the air" (your poem) at the demise of this larger-than-life man.
Pax,
Dora
A thunderous event...with a reference to Odin even, which brings me back to it again, to see what else I can discover..
It is a poetic tale, after all!
The hunter becomes the hunted in the end, to join the same pile of cooling meat. It's a sizzling denouement to your Blackthorne serial, cinematic to an extreme that only poetry achieves. Great stuff.
As I read this, a feeling that Buck (and his dad and Johnny) have been running from death their whole lives. Each day they walk upright is a day of blessing and grace. I think of them there, together, at the end, hoping they will rise together and roam the prairies safely, at-will, through eternity.
P.S. I wish at some point you would post the poem you read today about the holidays. I want to read it after hearing your wonderful reading of it. I wish none of it was reality which is so hard to face sometimes.
If there's beauty in dying, this is it.
Jade: You may find CRIMSONTIDE posted in my archives. It was written 30 years ago, the first time. Gentle readers remember, next year on OLN, further adventures of Buck will appear. These 9 episodes were written specifically for you. I hope you enjoy them.
"and at the bottom the leaders were dying in a cataclysmic chorus of death songs, and out of the blood mist runs Buck, on foot, making long strides toward the purple
mountains,".. this is absolutely stellar writing, Glenn! I could visualize everything so clearly. It's a pleasure to read your work! 💝💝
and he finally turned
to face the horns.
The finale tears the soul apart.
What an explosion of thunder, and panic, and futile determination as finally fate overtook them. Powerfully poetic brother, riveting, and breathless in its insistence. Great write my friend!
Always enjoy your Westerns. Takes me back to my teen days those were showing in the cinemas back then where i lived and i used to go see them
luv this first class oxymoron
"a ballet of beasts dancing at quarter speed"
much💜love
Bravo and encore, Glenn! A stunning denouement.
Oh, the finale! Extremely rivetting write.
A poetic finish to him (if not the series)-I like the combination of landing lightly amidst all the bang and roars around him.
I do remember when it all started and though I have missed a few when I have been away I do remember it all... fitting epilogue to tie it all together.
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