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Blackthorne
Cinemagenic 149
Rescate
“We are our own dragons and our own heroes,
and we have to rescue ourselves from ourselves.”
--Tom Robbins.
1(sound cue) guitar and coronets.
2(overhead drone shot--day for night) a wagon and
six riders were pushing hard.
3(sound cue) whips, wheels, and hooves.
4(drone descends to tighter shot) spinning wheels,
four-up team, the snap of reins, and the flexing of
wagon springs.
5(cut to a tracking shot at ground level) The
blacksmith was driving the team, and Doc
Sweeney sat next to him. Salina crouched behind
the doctor, hanging on tight, her hair flying in the
wind. Henry Wallace led the riders, all of which were
vaqueros, friends of Mateo.
6(sound cue) snare drums and banjo.
7(three-shot) Doc: Christ, I hope we’re not too late.
Salina: Buck will not die. I won’t allow it.
8(wide shot) a half mile from the Bronson Ranch,
they could see flames lighting up the sky, and the
staccato of gunfire was audible. As they rounded the
last corner, they could see what was left of the barn,
still an inferno; the whole scene in a hellish glow. The
ranch house was lit up with pistol fire.
9(overhead drone shot) a tremendous explosion went
off within the house. Part of the roof caved in, debris
began falling to earth. Men were rushing out of the
house.
10(medium wide shot) the newcomers rode in hot, with
guns blazing, and the exhausted ranch hands were
caught off guard. Between the fires, explosion, and gun
fights, there was only a half dozen wranglers still on
their feet. Three of them went down in a hail of oncoming
lead, The final three dropped their weapons and
surrendered, hands reaching for the demonic sky.
11(sound cue) loud voices, galloping horses, and the
sputtering of final gun shots over saxophone and juice
harp.
The big wagon slid to a stop, the blacksmith
jerking on the reins, yelling Whoa! Henry
Wallace spryly dismounted from a moving horse,
as did the five other riders.
Wallace: Where is Buck?
Ranch hand: He’s got to be dead. It’s been like
Shiloh around here!
Wallace: Did you see him die?
Hand: No, but I saw plenty of other men die. He
is like a one man army.
Salina, out of the wagon, holding a rifle: When did
you last see him?
Hand: I never did. I was fighting the barn fire, and
I was told they had him cornered in the house. By
the time I got there the place was on fire, and the next
thing I knew, there was a dynamite explosion. I don’t
think Mr. Bronson made it out of there.
A couple of the Mexicans ran off around both sides of
the house. One of the vaqueros came across a body
near the back of the house. He rolled it over. It
was Buck.
Vaquero: Hey, I found him! I found Buck!
Salina, Henry and the Doc arrived quickly. Salina bent
down and put her finger to his throat.
He is alive!
She lie on top of him, covering him.
Wallace: He lives! Buck is alive!
Glenn Buttkus
Posted over at d'Verse Poet's Pub
8 comments:
It was great to hear you read today.
But, he's alive?!! Wow!
I knew it! No way the legend could be dead!
Wow! Buck is still alive.
Nice end to as episode
Much💚love
Oh thank goodness he's alive!! This is exquisitely done, Glenn. I love the attention to details especially; "As they rounded the last corner, they could see what was left of the barn,still an inferno; the whole scene in a hellish glow." You bring the scene to life! Can't wait to read what happens next!💝💝
And the legend lives on!
It's about bloody time they got there! Poor Buck has been a one-man army and is blessed to still be breathing. Salina and her dad should have gotten there a long time ago! (I know, but just sayin!)
Always full of action. Glad he is alive! I am sad that I missed your reading. I have always been a big fan of this saga.
I knew that there would be some way to continue this... I hope he heals, wonder what will happen now when all the bad guys are dead.
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