painting of "The Hope" by Vika Muse.
Bolshoy Medved
“When the Bear begins to dance, it is not you who
decides when the dance is over--it’s the bear.”
--Russian Proverb.
The Russian Bear
is a bastard behemoth;
smaller now than before
the fall of the wall,
but still gargantuan,
monstrous,
bestial,
feral and
blood-thirsty.
When aroused
it will devour
men, women, and children;
an equal opportunity
slayer.
Normally
it wears a huge cruel spiked collar,
and is held fast by
a thousand ship’s anchor chains;
like King Kong,
too dangerous to tame.
Putin has loosed it
on the whole of Ukraine,
where it’s vicious love affair
with slaughter seems
never-ending.
The brave population of Ukraine,
though dying by the thousands,
continue to battle the bruin,
as America watches from afar.
The incredible spirit
of the Ukrainian people
rides a horse of light,
and carries a shining lance
that can slay dragons and bear,
and we do see the great bear
bleeding and limping, retreating
and licking its wounds.
We marvel at the visceral bravery
of the Ukrainians, and marvel further
at the flocks of white doves,
that fly into dangerous skies
making a protective murmuration,
offering peace in the iron sky
full of Russian missiles.
It is a fact that it is
hard to target one bird
amongst a moving flock
of millions.
It is written
that the warriors of light
will ultimately defeat
the evil forces of darkness;
meanwhile
the scorched landscape
is littered with broken wings,
broken dreams
and empty promises.
Glenn Buttkus
Poetics
Posted over at d'Verse Poet's Pub
13 comments:
This is ....exactly...what needs to be written.....written like a blacksmith strikes a sword, hard, firmly, but struck true..each hit. Your verse is real. Very, very real.
Wow. You gave a voice to every stroke of the brush. Exceptional. Thank you, Glenn...and for stopping into the pub to drop her a message. I will be emailing her to be sure she sees then all.
The final stanza is particularly effective.
"We marvel at the visceral bravery
of the Ukrainians, and marvel further
at the flocks of white doves,
that fly into dangerous skies."
Glen, written as only you can...that final verse leaves me hoping the warriors of light will defeat this darkness...and soon....
You have described the Russian bear very well along with the strength of the Ukrainian response. Very sad indeed!
I can definitely feel all the brushstrokes as Mish commented, your voice grabs the readers and tells it like it is.
Such a hard-hitting write, Glenn! Telling the truth as it is.
Exactly as it is Glenn. As I would expect from you.
WOW!!!!! Exactly the way it should be written
MUCH💜LOVE
oh, this is so true, everything you've written. Very brave poem with striking true. Impressed by your open manner. Thank you for this poem!💛💙
This was my first thought of the poem, with the shadow of the bear, but I opeted for more home, a hope I don't really have.
Dude a very powerful poem, emotion in every line. I really, really liked this.
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