painting by Gustav Klimt
Final Cue
“exit stage left.”--actor’s script.
At some point,
artificial intelligence
will be sentient.
Will it have a soul?
Today, the Mars Rover simply
says: My battery is low
and it’s getting dark.
It saddens me
that some people
when discussing death
believe in nothing;
leagues beyond atheism,
they feel that death
is a permanent dirt nap,
a flip of the Big Switch,
a terminal power failure,
a forever implosion
that produces nothing;
darkness and forever silence,
devoid of hope.
I tend to believe
we have a Higher Self,
who is a co-creator of the Universe.
It is often referred
to as the Soul.
It is the most refined form of energy.
Energy cannot be destroyed,
it can only be transitioned
or transformed into something else.
In the inexplicable vastness
of a trillion trillion galaxies,
this spiritual energy
is its most valuable commodity.
To even consider
letting loose of it,
or destroying it
is unthinkable.
I suppose
if New Age and Zen
had a baby, it
would look a lot like me.
I am truly spiritual
without being religious.
If “Death is but a Doorway”,
then as I journey beyond the veil,
I expect to be alone,
even if I’m not,
or fast asleep
when the moment
of transition
catches up to me,
and sweeps me
out of my aged husk.
I hope to say,
to myself,
or to family,
or to the very air
I flee from,
Well...fuck me.
Glenn Buttkus
Posted over at d'Verse Poet's Pub
11 comments:
realy enjoyed your philosophic take on death beginning with the Mars rover - your brief last words certainly had impact but the whole journey of the soul was perfectly envisioned, especially set against the nihilism of non believers in transition
"and sweeps me
out of my aged husk."
Luv the Zen and New Age coupling.
Much❤love
My goodness this is breathtaking! The poem in its entirety engulfs you, and lets you breathe in the philosophy and emotion that it has to offer. I especially love; "Energy cannot be destroyed, it can only be transitioned or transformed into something else." Yes! ❤️❤️
That's a good way to go - its gutsy.
Also, I believe in a Higher Self, the spiritual architect of our vast universe.
Gorgeous Glenn, simply superb — gripping, consuming… I’m moved to tears my friend… and you are beating my drum brother, ringing my gong! Quite precisely what I see looking over the horizon, exquisitely expressed! ✌🏼❤️
So well writ! "and sweeps me out of my aged husk." To describe our aging bodies as an aged husk...well that is just plain brilliant! I have to also say, I smiled at the ending!
Glenn is it wrong of me to laugh at your last words? I hope not. I believe as you do, the end is not the end.
I am one of those who doesn’t see any reason why there should be anything after. Our embodied energy might disperse, but I doubt any form of soul or consciousness will go with it. Sort of hope I am wrong though. I appreciate your hopefulness.
Nice accounting of our journey from life to death (didn't start with birth?) and beyond. Your lines, "
Energy cannot be destroyed, it can only be transitioned or transformed into something else" state the mechanics your writer thinks might control.
I'm with grace, I have my hopes with a divine creator, God.
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Jim,
jimmiehov6.blogspot.com
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"Energy cannot be destroyed, it can only be transitioned or transformed into something else." Oh Glen, that is absolutely gorgeous!
Famous last words for sure, Glenn! I agree, the end is not the end.
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