Tuesday, March 22, 2016

Ascension of Larks


image borrowed from chron.com


Ascension of Larks

“The unseen essential awaits your enlightened heart’s
ascension to love.”--Bryant McGill

With Spring, beyond its fecundity, comes wings
of every conceivable variety; fluttering

on beauteous artful flights of Monarch butterflies,
      or humming drolly on wedges of dirt-brown munching moths, 
                 or flapping madly on descents of gnarly bats spinning
                         out of dark caverns, or an audacious glimpse of a majestic
               airie of bald eagles, or a clever cast of hungry peregrines
      dropping down like feathered missiles from the electric
azure ether to snatch rodents, or a bedazzling bevy  
of snow-white doves perching in the pink
blossoms of the tulip tree in our backyard,
or that gobbling gaggle of wild turkeys hav-
ing a squawk-off with an exotic muster of
albino peacocks on a ranch near the beach
above Hilo, or a frightened covey of quail
scurrying out of the tall grass along a dense forest trail, or a quacking
        brace of green-headed mallards flying dangerously low over some
                     concealed blinds ready to give buckshot greetings, or a
                           curt kettle of red-tailed hawks floating on thermals like
                                  bellicose kites on their daily rabbit raids, or a noisy
                                           colony of gray Pacific gulls at the beach fighting
                                                     a malicious murder of crows for scraps of
                                                     stale Wonder bread that we had tossed into
                                                     kelp-kissed negative ionic breezes, or amidst
a raucous riot of tropical colors spread out
over San Francisco Bay as frantic flocks
of conures glide masterfully around the
top of the Coit tower--              all flapping toward the crescendo, 
                                                 the epilogue,
                                                 as wondrous wedges, 
                                                 garrulous gaggles,
                                                 sensuous skeins,
                                                 flitting flushes,
                                                 skimming scolds,
                                                 scintillating sieges, &
                                                 wily wisps
of divers birds create a sky ballet to the angelic orchestrations provided by the 
restless winds, while swirling & twisting into living abstract ciphers, performing
elaborate murmurations that never cease to enthrall & entertain.
                                                      

                                             
Glenn Buttkus


20 comments:

  1. Oh Glenn... you put me there in that avian beauty... how wonderful, how absolutely gorgeous....Especially that finale.

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  2. Wow you used a lot of bird groups, luv the shape of the poem too

    much love...

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  3. Beautiful shape and gorgeous words describing a world I will never see, but you have given me in your poem 😊

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  4. This is splendid work here :D left me breathless...!!

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  5. To behold and witness such dancing in the sky would be a joy to see Glenn ~

    Love the passion and zeal, including the shape of your words on the screen ~

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  6. These are all my favorites:

    or humming drolly on wedges of dirt-brown munching moths
    gnarly bats spinning
    a clever cast of hungry peregrines
    dropping down like feathered missiles from the electric / azure ether
    perching in the pink
    gobbling gaggle of wild
    a squawk-off with an exotic muster
    brace of green-headed
    ready to give buckshot greetings
    kelp-kissed negative ionic breezes
    flapping toward the crescendo
    flitting flushes
    scintillating sieges
    twisting into living abstract ciphers

    That was a pretty majestic presentation, yourself, Sir.

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  7. Quite an in-depth piece of work really. Well done.

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  8. I love the movement in your swarm of words, Glenn! Well done!

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  9. Entranced by this, entirely.
    You got so many of the group names in there, and used them so beautifully.
    LOVE this:
    "wings
    of every conceivable variety; fluttering"

    And your poem spills like a fluttering of wings, a murmuration of swallows, a flock...

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  10. Gayle Walters RoseMarch 22, 2016 at 6:43 PM

    Bravo! Where mine went to humor, yours went to beauty with incredible visions of the amazing variety of avian groupings. LOVE it!!

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  11. LOVE this, especially the wild turkeys having a "squawk-off" with the albino peacocks...a fine feathered poem!

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  12. I agree with Gayle, Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! (Applause and poesies thrown at the stage). I want to live in the world of this poem, in the ecstatic flying wing beat joy of abundance!

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  13. wily wisps of divers birds create a sky ballet
    to the angelic orchestrations provided by the
    restless winds,

    Beautifully described of the gracefulness of flight. A classic ending Glenn!

    Hank

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  14. The shape of this poem is beautiful. This is absolutely one of your best poems ever - the change of tone, subject, viewpoint - one of your best, truly and a most beautiful and exultant poems of all those on the dVerse road today. I had to read this thrice and enjoyed it more every reading. I hope you will share more of the Glenn and the heart that wrote this. Listening to the birds around and seeing them in the air just dramatized this joy of a poem. Please sir, I want some more.

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  15. I think you've got 'em all! And it's wonderful to hear it in your voice, Glenn.

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  16. This is fabulous and I am a bird lover. Using your peripheral view you captured such beauty. Hey, I wrote something on my blog you might be interested in when you get a chance.

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  17. A sky ballet indeed. You have such a way with words, imagery, and though progression. I am right there with you and it is a joy.
    Bellicose kites......well those two words jump out at me here in Bermuda. Good Friday is a national holiday and there is a tradition of kite flying -- but not just kite flying. Folks make their own kites and they add, somewhere on the kite, a cross in reference to Easter, and they also make them as "hummers." They dance and battle in the sky and hum loudly too! Bellicose kites....I shall remember those words as we join in for the the first time, in this island tradition. We shall return to Boston on Tuesday.....my reading and writing shall be back to a more normal schedule.....Bermuda beguiles and I am so late to the bar! :(

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  18. Wow, you really used a lovely collection of collective nouns & made me appreciate the beauty in nature! I enjoyed this, Glenn!

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  19. Ah.. a UniVerse
    of Birds..
    encyclopedia
    of words floWinG
    flying freely among
    sentences
    that move
    no less
    than
    WinGs
    that fly hiGher
    than lower.. my friEnd..:)

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