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“Each of us can manifest the properties of a
field of consciousness that transcends space,
time, and linear causality.”--Stanislav Grof
Life is linear,
with inception as crowned vanguard,
& deterioration as
destination, creating a
vibrant colorful mosaic, a throbbing
kaleidoscope, a series
of devious gilded
dust bunnies, kenneled in brass
pots, tucked under
beds, stacked in
teetering tall piles in the
corner, hidden in
closets, sequestered in
broken shoe boxes, saved in
forgotten family albums,
treasured within folds
of red velvet, gift-wrapped tightly
in tissue paper.
***********************
Death is the
impudent speck of counterpoint, egress
as extinguishment, our
imminent arrival at
Critical Mass, having traveled inexorably
from birth of
a planet to
the death of a star;
the magical transition
another face, a
different roof, a parallel dimensional
and domicidal shift
with different doorways
for each of us, windowless,
wiped of numerals.
*****************************
Death as lover
lies with mold on bread crust,
with the fish
on dirty ice,
with bloody steaks piled up
neatly in shrink--
wrapped pinkish lines,
with the flowers cut and
ready to wither,
with the polished
color-injected fruit placed perfectly
in supermarket bins;
everything waiting for
the passionate embrace of many
mouths, mighty molars
reducing it to
grist, paste, & slivers before
rot robs its
beauty, rendering it
sustenance for carrion, for pets,
whose alimentary components
are impervious to
the several varieties of carcinogens
deep within it;
harbored, hidden, but
obviously still a beast at
bay, restrained, tethered,
muzzled, yet never
eradicated, excommunicated, banished, forsaken, broken
beyond its voracity.
Glenn Buttkus
February 2013
Posted over on dVerse Poets OLN
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17 comments:
Glen--this is incredible. Love especially part 3, so gritty, grainy, and real.
What a journey this collection of lunes takes us on! Enjoyed this rich feast for eyes, mouth, ears and mind.
This is amazing work Glen, vivid imagery and rhythm, this really popped out at me:
destination, creating a
vibrant colorful mosaic, a throbbing
kaleidoscope
A great write!
nice man...great intensity to the last one of this series...the textures...mold with lover in the same line...dang....death will always be....until it is not...
Great mixture of feeling and emotions in a journey of images. I like this a lot
Death. The final frontier.
Your finish is delivered as a killing blow! It is the third that sweetens it most for me...not that all aren't fantastic...but we all have our ways ;)
Lovely lune poems ~ I specially like the take on death as a magical transition and as a lover ~ Superb lines here Glenn ~
Oi! Spot on...!
"From the birth of a planet to the death of a star" - favorite line in this. It makes me think of what each of those would look like and what it would mean on a personal level (I'm an astronomy fan) You write some of the most beautiful poetry - I don't always quite understand the meaning every single time but I always appreciate the incredible depth of your words
Had the time so listened to this one and confess, your words sound wonderful rolling off your tongue - you have a quality to your voice very suited to the mic...that being said, the poem itself is very good -- so many strong images, all of them vivid; I think I may be coming back to re-read this but that's not unusual with your poems ... they tend to stick in my mind ... nice.
http://aleapingelephant.blogspot.ca/2013/02/the-trees-stand-watch_26.html
Hi, this is really a great piece woven with lines of darkness. A lot to digest some great imagery and word selection.
This has fabulous tension building up all the way to the finish... Powerful, visceral imagery that delivers truth. A great poem.
heck.. powerful images glenn..and oh how i wished that life was linear...mine never seems to be ya know...smiles
What a contrast between the abstract ideas and the dust bunnies, the philosophical concepts and bread mould, the beauty of the universe and the broken shoe boxes. The sublime and the mundane. Great bopping indeed!
fierce story of life and death.
gilded dust bunnies made me laugh, but the impudent speck of counterpoint made me think of lady macbeth's "out damn spot".
windowless, wiped of numerals is strong.
death as lover is a brutal kind of grace as we return our gift to source . for integrated life beyond the self
This might be your finest work, Glenn.
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