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Blackthorne
Cinemagenic 142
Trinity Down
“The trinity is mere Abracadabra of the
mountebanks calling themselves the
priests of Jesus.”--Thomas Jefferson.
1(sound cue) soft piano
2(medium close-up) Buck chewed the chicken and
waited. He heard no one. His eyes glowed red,
reflecting his rage and the fire.
3(medium wide shot) He moved out into the open,
and moved swiftly to the staircase.
4(sound cue) low cello throbs and Indian seed rattle.
5(cut to the top of the stairs) watching Buck ascend
the stairs two at a time like a stalking cat.
6(medium close-up) He paused on the landing for the
second floor. He froze, listening. Shuffling boots and
loud voices suddenly rose up from below. He
unholstered the sawed-off.
7(medium wide-shot) The stairs to the third floor
seemed to go to the attic. The small door at the top
was padlocked. He cocked the sawed-off and crept
down a dark corridor, passing closed doors.
A light came on in one of the rooms ahead of him.
Beams of light bent under the door and brightly
penciled an outline around it. Buck stood to one
side of it. He could hear soft moans. The voices
downstairs became audible. Cash Bronson was in
the house.
Buck tried the door knob. It was locked. He
lowered his shoulder and crashed into the door
like a raging bull.
8(sound cue) Coronet and electric guitar.
9(cut to interior of the room) as the door
disintegrated into kindling, and Buck lurched
into the room.
10(two-shot) Thor Bronson rose up off the bed, with
his cock in one hand and a framed picture of Salina
in the other. The gunman was holding the picture in
his injured right hand, and his .38 was cross-holstered
on his right hip. The two men faced each other, frozen
in time, one with a double barreled sawed-off shotgun,
and the other with an erect penis.
11(sound cue) breaking glass
12(close-up) Salina’s picture hit the floor and the
glass cover shattered.
13(close-up) Thor’s left hand went for his .38.
Even with his left hand, he was fast, as he drew
the pistol.
14(sound cue) a gutteral scream, a Colt
discharging, and a shotgun roaring--all
simultaneously.
15(two-shot) both men firing.
16(close-up) A mirror behind buck exploding.
17(close-up) Thor being hit in the left hand and
the right hip.
18(close-up) buckshot tearing up the wall behind
Thor.
19(two-shot) the impact knocked Thor onto the
bed. His eyes were glassy. He was in shock, so he
felt no pain yet. He gripped his gunshot left hand
with his crippled right hand, and gasped:
Goddamn, why did you come back? You were home
free. No one was chasing you.
Buck holstered his sawed-off and roughly jerked Thor
to his feet.
Time to meet the Devil.
20(cut to hallway) as Buck pushed Thor back toward
the landing.
21(sound cue) Cash Bronson from downstairs:
Thor! Are you still standing?
22(close up) Thor, screaming: C A S H !!
23(two-shot) Buck rammed his fist into the small of
Thor’s back, spinning him around.
Buck: He is fine, Cash! He’s coming right down to
see you!
Buck drew the Thunderer, and fired once into the
gunman’s genitals. Then he shoved him down the
stairs. Thor rolled down the stairs like a broken
scarecrow, his feet flashing into the air, as he
followed his cock down to hell.
24(sound cue) three gunshots.
Buck shot him three times as he tumbled down.
Thor’s body jerked to the left, crashed through a
bannister, and fell ten feet to the floor, landing
stone dead.
Seven guns reciprocating Buck’s fire.
Glenn Buttkus
Posted over at d'Verse Poet's Pub OLN
10 comments:
Glenn, I haven't read this episode yet because I first want to let you know that your link at Mr. Linky doesn't come to the episode. Can you please check it and try again? Once I see the good link to it, I will delete the other link.
You made my heart skip the way you described Buck hearing the soft moaning behind the locked door and my eye skipped to Salina's name in the text. What a way for Thor to go. He got what he deserved! He earned that ending! I can see him, maimed, shot, crumpled, rolling down the staircase. I hope Buck survives that barrage of bullets! I really wonder what (or who) is locked in the attic...
Yikes! What an episode--erect penis and gunfire. What a way for Thor to go, and you left us with another cliffhanger.
So original, such a clever idea, and merge of art forms.
as usual, on the edge of the verge...
I did laugh when it turned out to be Salina's picture Thor was moaning over! Looks like the end to his cocksure days...keep the action coming!
Bravo!
And I enjoyed Ingrid's "cocksure days" comment as much as I did this episode.
I hesitate to call this "fan" fiction, but on the other hand, only a fan could have written this epic fail of Thor's. :>)
pax,
dora
And so your epic rolls on Glenn — may it not end until it is over… peace and health brother!
My heart stopped before I realized it was only the picture of Salina he had there. What a pathetic ending for the gunman.
But maybe Buck has crossed the border where he has no real future left.
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