A Lady Prepares
1.
Seattle,
during twilight,
purrs with soft evening noises;
traffic lights suddenly brilliant,
blinking;
headlights in chrome grills
snapping on;
street lights buzzing
just before they bathe the ground
with amber incandescence;
superferries gliding
through darkening water
flicking on their deck lights.
For a few golden moments
all the western windows catch fire,
and the shimmering orange icons
captured coldly
on the urban faces of glass,
silently lick at the ebony loins
of the night.
A city of shadows,
perching on those seven hills,
turns on,
and the deep saltwater bay at its feet
becomes a vast mirror
reflecting
the garishly-lit steel canyons
of its unique skyline.
2.
Seattle,
during twilight,
purrs with soft
evening noises; traffic lights
suddenly brilliant, blinking; headlights in
chrome
grills snapping
on; street lights
buzzing just before they
bathe the ground with amber
incandescence;
superferries gliding
through darkening water
flicking on their deck
lights. Then for a few
golden
moments all
the western windows
catch fire, and the
shimmering orange icons captured coldly
on
the urban
faces of glass,
silently lick at the
ebony loins of the night.
A
city of
shadows, perching on
those seven hills, turns
on, and the deep saltwater
bay
at its
feet becomes a
vast mirror reflecting the
garishly-lit steel canyons of
its
unique skyline.
Glenn Buttkus October 2010
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12 comments:
Glenn, I am familiar with Seattle by having traveled there a number of times. Had not realized here are seven hills. But so much of what you said about Seattle in this poem rings totally true to me. Inspired writing!
Seattle, during twilight..well written..now I knew more about that place :)
I've only been to Seattle once and when the plane banked and turned toward Mt. Rainier, I thought, "Why am I living in the Midwest?" Beautiful piece.
Two of my three kids live in Seattle. Well described! I go our often to visit. Your poem is stunning!
One hill has been cut down and dumped into the bay.
To Willow's question; because the storms are magnificent, better than anything Hollywood eve came up with?
Words and picture are interwoven here, no mistake...
Nice. I heart Seattle.
I've never been to Seattle but good Lord...now I must get there before twilight.
There are several lines that just take me straight to a city. I have never been to Seattle but I imagine it from photos and movies.
"Purr with soft evening noises
amber incandescence shimmering orange icons
deep saltwater bay - vast mirror
all western windows catch fire
silently lick at the ebony loins of the night."
My friend, You have made me utterly and completely homesick for my San Diego, as all of those words apply equally to that city.
What wonderful words you have written if I close my eyes I am there! Thank you.
perfectly captured! Bravo!
love the imagery,
a city with noises, people, and more...
beautiful poem!
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