image by glenn buttkus
Hilo Dawn
That first morning on the ragged cusp
of the Clay Ranch, we were awakened
with the sun bursting through the bamboo shutters,
papaya-orange across a violent green yard,
past soldier-rows of eucalyptus and leche nut trees,
an ocean cross-breeze cooling us after
the swelter of tropical slumber
during our virginal evening
in that stilted brown bungalow
near Akakia Falls.
What rousted us initially was not
the eastern Hawaiian orb rising hot
out of a steaming aqua sea, shamelessly
smearing the coastal cumulus
with a brash morning thrust, no,
it was a pure Copeland composition
thick on the wind, three roosters heralding,
joined by wild turkeys roosting low
on the branches of the gray-green trees
lining the country lane, challenged by
two flocks of tame peacocks roaming
the high grassy fields between us
and a large ranch house,
with mossy weathered fence posts,
angus cattle, and sleek horses
in paddocks, corrals, and pens
parallel to a vociferous river plunging fast
through palms and koa, dressed
in twenty hues of yellow, green, and ochre,
nestled at the base of a snow capped volcano,
dotted with the silver buttons
of several observatories.
I sat in a reed chair on the enclosed front porch
peering excitedly over a red railing, talking
to a male peacock perched presumptuously
on the half gate at the top of the stairs,
sipping Chinese tea, staring wide-eyed at the Pacific,
with my maps and notes spread out beside me
on a forest green folding table, meticulously
planning our week on the big island;
ready with our Jeep Liberty to scale all 13, 796 feet
of Mauna Kea, riding the saddle road between coasts,
with the plumpness of Mauna Loa below us,
lush with coffee plantations on its burly withers;
ready to swing joyfully over the top
past majestic waterfalls and botanical gardens,
to pause high above the sacred Waipio Valley,
dotted patchwork with taro farm ponds
and many rivers flowing madly midst
the deep mysteries of hidden forest and jungle canopies
with wild horses galloping fleet across the floor
of flowered meadows, all crashing headlong
into the towering waves beating the beaches
along the bay--ready to greet the dark throngs
of cattle at Waimea, where the wild west married
the island gods, breeding fat black cattle,
among Arabians and Mustangs, with palominos
dancing in every corral; ready to lumber breathlessly
over the shoulders of the slumbering giant Mahukona,
to sigh at the sight of Maui off Upolu Point, looming
large like a rogue mauna that had broken away
from the northern shore, sliding down to the tranquility
of the village at Hawi for our Kauhola anniversary dinner;
ready to swing hard due south to witness first hand
the caustic and dangerous plume of volcanic steam
venting out of Pelle’s orifice, the Kilauea Caldron,
with a sea of magma pulsating beneath,
to wander as strangers struggling across the moonscape
of lava flows, noting the abstract art of the shapes
frozen in pumice and stone--ready to bounce
over the washboard ruts out to the lighthouse
at Cape Kumukahi, pausing hungrily to purchase
huli-huli chicken broiling fetchingly in a local’s yard,
to stand neath the beacon on that black lava expanse
at the back of the Jeep pulling apart that delicious capon
and devouring it whole as we stood sticky-fingered
staring at sea turtles beached and napping
on an ebon blanket and swimming
within the jagged teeth of black grottos--
ready to respond to the sirens of the surf,
ready to revel in the playground of the mountain gods,
ready for the honeymoon we never had time to take,
ready for the howling and the luau of love.
Glenn Buttkus
April 2011
Repost September 2014
Posted over on dVerse Poets Poetics
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24 comments:
"Wonderful to read your experiences in poetical form. Dreamy and magical."
Glad to see you’ve made it back to Hell-o.
No fucking introduction, just back to the poetic grindstone, past soldiers of You-kalyptos and lecherous nut trees, virginal lipservice, bugaloo boolskite, near Acolyte Falls . The hot orb rising must have steamed aqua shame, brash thrusts of Grand Canyon vulvas, roosters herald wild turkey hits and peacock moans, angus cattle lowing, paddocked horses crowing, penises parallel palms, nice to be Om, good to be Om, Om Om on the range.
oh wow... this sounds like a beautiful place... love how you describe it and most of all love the scene on the porch - the talking to the peacock, drinking chinese tea and planning the discovery trip
Glenn, you definitely 'had me' with this poem. I have been there. Just wondering if it was the Parker Ranch. That is the ranch on the Big Island I remember; and I remember thinking what an unusual place to find cowboys. I've been up to Mauna Kea Observatory,but with an evening tour...which provided parkas for the extreme cold. And I bet I know the restaurant you ate in at Hawi. Bamboo, I think was its name. I've been over at the volcano too....not too close though. Smiles. And, aren't the sea turtles spectacular. You took me down memory lane, and I enjoyed it!
Your poem certainly makes us travel. I enjoyed the scene with the roosters, turkeys and peacocks and your rendering of the tropical atmosphere. It seems it was a well-worth belated honeymoon.
No, Mary, the Parker Ranch is up on the N. side, where you can see Maui on a clear day. The Clay Ranch is on the E. side, close to Hilo. We loved the 300 mile circumnavigation around & across the
Big Island.
Wow, I want to go there, smiles ~ This looks like a amazing experience Glenn ~ Hopefully one day we can travel there & see the place ourselves ~
Thanks, Glenn! I never saw / heard of the Clay Ranch. I didn't spend much time close to Hilo.
i like the mossy posts... and how you strolled into this piece... so relaxed
So… that was day one… what did you do the rest of the week? ha ha Wow - this is the most colorful and brimming account of a trip i have ever read or heard (I'm used to my kids coming home from school and responding to "How was your day"… with "fine".
Really enjoyed this.
I was in Hilo for my honeymoon, and your poem makes me very nostalgic for it. Maybe we should start saving to go for our 10th anniversary. Excellent poem.
What a colorful pallet you have painted with in this poem! Simply lovely descriptions!
The joy of travelling when you are bubbling like a joyful clay pot of all you saw and all you felt - what a place, where just the names seem like a poem, and eating is a song :-)
love this huge canvas dotted with the color of an enchanting journey..
Glenn, you make me want to outfit an outrigger canoe and go off to discover paradise! Nice picture too.
I'd say you were more than ready to be there ... Exotic locations are filled with strange twists on the familiar -- this is so ripe with flavors and scents that are dear for being so far, for being almost sexually revealed, reveled in. Oboy oboy: I feel like I'm about to dive naked into Aprhodite's warm blue swimming pool. A feast.
A description dripping with sensuousness, colour and appealing to all the senses - certainly makes me want to go and visit!
Glenn, despite the fact that I feel I was there from your loving and lush descriptions, I now want to go there. This reminds me of the feeling I had the first day our older daughter and I woke in Costa Rica.
janet
Nice glimpse into your honeymoon...I also wonder if each day was better than the next, sharing all the beauty with your loved one...sounds special..have been only to Oahu...tho.....someday maybe ;)
This poem is splendiferously rich in images: you took us with you all the way.
You made me realize how much I missed when I was there. Now I have to go back. Thanks, I think.
Heightened emotions evident in your sumptuous descriptions. Well done, Glenn.
Glenn,
This was wonderful to read as you took me right there and to be honest, I wanted to jump inside the poem and do some exploring.
Oh you took me there, where I have never been and now I know why my cousin is in love with Hawaii! Such richness!
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