painting by Travis Knight
Blackthorne
Cinemagenic Seventy-Six
Bravo
“I didn’t want to come up with some generic
Johnny Bravo type name. I’m not that cool.”
--Colin Hanks
1(overhead wide drone shot) the town crusts and
dusty range riders peeled off the corral rails, with
Johnny walking toward them.
2(medium close ups/jump cut) the crowd:
“Great Ride !” “Fucking wonderful !” “Knocked
my damn boots off !” “That’s showing him !”
“You busted him good !”
3(two-shot) the Eagle walked up to Cash Bronson.
Cash held out his hand, as big as Johnny’s, and
the Indian shook it firmly.
4(over Johnny’s shoulder) Cash: Jesus, let me pay
you! That’s the best damned ride I’ve seen in years.
He must have shaken your guts out.”
5(over Bronson’s shoulder) Johnny smiled a little:
“No thank-you, Mr. Bronson. I don’t work for you
any more. I work out at Antlered Buck.”
6(sound cue) piano chord.
7(close-up) Bronson, his good cheer fading.
8(medium close-up) Johnny: “Tell you what, El Hefe,
if you really want to pay me, please keep your
money, but make sure that your men treat this
horse with respect. Ryker can saddle break him
now, but have him use a gentle hand.”
9(two-shot) over Johnny’s shoulder--Bronson:
“Sounds fair to me.”
10(medium wide shot) Bronson turning to Ryker, who
was picking up some gear, and trying not to
participate. Bronson: “Do you understand, Ryker?
We want this bronco jughead gentled enough that
Pauly can ride him”.
11(close-up) Ryker, his face turning red: “Yes, sir.”
12(medium close up) Buck: “Do you really need this
horse?”, asking quietly.
13(three-shot) Bronson: “Ah, Mister Buck,” with a
smug smile starting to work at the corners of his
mouth,”Here you are, the big bad stranger, returned
at last. You certainly got my attention.”
Buck: “Did I?”
Bronson: “This is kind of a small town, Not
much goes on here that I don’t hear about.”
Buck: “I’m sure that’s true.”
Bronson: “Like I heard this morning that you
had a little trouble over at my place the other
day. Raised quite a ruckus.”
14(two-shot) Buck, over Bronson’s shoulder:
“I wouldn’t call that trouble.”
15(sound cue) banjo & harmonica.
16(close-up) Bronson: “Christ--you scared the
hell out of half my girls, shot one of my casino
guards, and tossed my little brother out of a
second story window...and you don’t call that
trouble? Sure, there were plenty of
witnesses, but we had to cancel your visit with
the welcome wagon!”
17(close-up) Buck: “No one got killed.”
18(two-shot) Bronson: “Yes, that’s true--not in my
place anyways.”
Buck: “What are you saying?”
Bronson: “I’m saying that for a fellow whose only
been in town a short while, and who claims he
wants to settle down and live here, you certainly
are a hellraiser.”
19(close up) Paul Bronson, his expression anxious,
angry, but plagued with a coward’s anxiety.
20(close up) Thor Bronson, his face stone hard,
his eyes still blazing, his mouth a tight smear.
21(sound cue) branch flute.
21(close up) Johnny Eagle, exhausted but pleased
with himself.
22(two-shot) Buck, over Bronson’s shoulder: “I’d
say that most of that ruckus was just a misunder-
standing. I’m still trying to get my bearings. I’ve
been gone quite a spell--and I just wasn’t used
to the way you run things.”
23(close up) Bronson: “So, would you say that
now you are getting used to it?”
24(close-up) Buck, after a small pause: “ Yeah,
I’m starting to catch on.
25(two-shot) Bronson, with a hard smile: “Hell,
I almost like you. Just come to me if you have
any questions.”
26(close-up) Buck: “What about the horse?”
Glenn Buttkus
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