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Dragon’s Breath
“A wise man will not pour wildfire on a brazier.”
--George R. R. Martin.
No hillside
is too steep
for the undulating
wave of flames
from a voracious
wildfire;
fueled by
one discarded cigarette,
aided by steeping temps
and howling winds--
stew of death.
Top of the larch is
bare--lightning struck, becoming spire
or charred sad steeple.
Glenn Buttkus
Posted over at dVerse Poets Pub
22 comments:
steeping temps - a powerful ingredient to this infernal recipe - really liked the use of that phrase, very original to me and conveyed the urgency of flight from danger.
I fear that the fires will continue to come... the steeping temps turn trees to tinder
I like that closing haiku - the aftermath, desolate.
the fire is like a predator here, waiting for an opportunity...
I fear more wildfires due to the heating of the earth.
sometimes the forests get so dry in the underbrush that a flicker can start a conflagration.
So sad
A terrifying scene, Glenn, with the ‘undulating wave of flames’ and the bare-lightning struck larch – all of that from a discarded cigarette and the stew of death! I agree with Sarah about
the losing haiku and the desolate aftermath.
I especially admire the closing haiku.. poignant in its reality and depth!
Very vivid picture of how one small action can spark so much destruction.
Vivid, Glenn, terrifying and topical....JIM
Perfect title. You used "steep" twice which was real nice....but "stew of death", that is a poignant and disturbing phrase.
Dragon breath indeed. I fear more fires and disasters. I wonder when mankind will be more vigilant and to think some don't believe in global warming.
Yes, it's terrible that huge fires can sprout from one careless action sometimes.
Well said, Glenn. Such destruction caused by carelessness.
I like your description of that fire as a "stew".
Very vivid and compelling. I also like how your final haiku reminds us that destruction can be a natural-struck match, too.
'stew of death'—apocalyptic language here.
Well said!
Very cool Glenn. You hit the trifecta of "steep"! This is a powerful write, filled with sad truth. But fire is a necessay violent aspect of the natural world. Flame forges the golden chalice. I love this one brother!
“Stew of death” indeed. Good use of the word steep under horrible circumstances. Was horrified by the demise of the Californian town Paradise which literally turned into a raging hell.
Dragons are hard to fight, we are they. Furious pursuing rhythms. Terrifying.
Love that first verse. Unrelenting dragon indeed.
Pat
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