painting by Elena Kotliarker.
Love Is
“I love you simply, without problems or pride; so
intimate that when I fall asleep your eyes close.”
--Pablo Neruda.
Love is magma muscle,
the vertex of the flesh husk
we choose to inhabit.
Love is the engineer
that directs the plethora of emotions,
the executive producer
for the daily broadcast
we consider as our life.
Love can, and perhaps must,
overpower the darker impulses,
can smooth them out,
even eradicate them.
If love were a hormone,
it would spring from the heart,
treating it like a railroad round house,
providing for itself several routes of egress.
Love is not lust, not greed or avarice
or selfishness--no, it is the antithesis
of these; selflessness,
vulnerability,
integrity,
honesty,
near transparency
Love can be too often misunderstood,
misinterpreted, misaligned and misused
by a sweet tooth,
an erection,
ego, preferences
and inhibition.
Life can be reduced to mathematics.
Love can combine math and heart emissions,
and provide startling solutions
to problems, diplomacy, negotiations
and relationships.
Love can be the departure & the destination
the before and the after,
the darkness and the light,
the reason d’etre,
or Cupid’s curse.
Jesus wept,
out of love
and the lack of it.
Glenn Buttkus
Metaphors
Posted over at dVerse Poets Pub
14 comments:
I really love this which is almost an essay of what love is, a bridgebuilder... all that is good... the last stanza of Jesus weeping also tells of its complexity.
Nice lines: "If love were a hormone,
it would spring from the heart,"
Powerful metaphors in a poem about love, Glenn, and some quite masculine, especially ‘magma muscle’ and the lines:
‘If love were a hormone,
it would spring from the heart,
treating it like a railroad round house,
providing for itself several routes of egress.’
I love the lines:
‘Love can be the departure & the destination
the before and the after,
the darkness and the light,
the reason d’etre,
or Cupid’s curse.’
You have here black-and-white, yes-and-no, truth-and-lies - all of it in testimony to the commitment of love. And so true.
Tight write. I love this line: "the vertex of the flesh husk" I'm glad someone knows something about love. I'm still with the Joni Mitchell school.
The last three lines in this sums it all up.
Glenn, this is a beautiful poem. I love every line.
This is quite beautiful brother. I really like when you unleash your PBShelley. You have a romantic heart, seasoned with a tad of righteous anger. Helluva write dude — loved it!
This phrase really caught me unexpectedly: "misaligned and misused by a sweet tooth"
Wow Glenn. This is one of your best!
This is a powerful message of what love can represent. You took the reader down a
winding path, breathless wondering where it would end.
I love this Glenn...the sheer originality of your metaphors...one to come back to, again and again...JIM
amazing sentiments in here glenn. though it felt disjointed in parts, i've felt these things myself.
Original and powerful; apt metaphors for love!
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