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Halcon Peregrino
“Ignorance is the curse of God. Knowledge is the
wings wherewith we fly to heaven.”
--William Shakespeare.
I am the King Kong of falcons,
Peregrine, baby, the raptor
prince of the stratosphere.
I’m a handsome lad--been on
my own for 13 years. Check me
out, dark gray, with a Stygian
black helmet. My eyering and
cere is butterfly yellow. My ebon
beak is snappy and small, very
sharp, very hooked and blood-
stained. I have buff pointed
wings, with a span of four
feet, with a long sweet tail.
I fly high
and fast;
a lethal missile
that swoops down
on smaller birds
snatching them
out of the sky.
I can fly, cruising
at 40mph, and when I drop
down with my wings pinned
back, I can hit 170 mph, just
slicing the air, nearly silent, a
dagger of feathered death.
My parents were pets to
an Asian falconer, a nomad
on the steppes of Russia,
a mere falcon’s flight from
Alaska. My name stands
for Wanderer, or Pilgrim.
My brethren can be found
on every continent. I was set
free at a year old, and I
immigrated to America.
My claimed air space
is above the Olympic
National forest.
My nest is built at
4,000 feet, on the steep
cliff shoulders of Mt. Olympus,
nestled on an ancient Sitka Spruce
tree root, strong, and secure. The nest
once belonged to a pair of bald eagles.
Damn, they used to hunt me, but even
while double-teamed, I proved to be
too swift, too bold, too powerful for
them. It helped that they were
elders, and i was at the peak
of my youth.
My reward was
that I outlived
them, and now
I own their fine nest.
I’ve had the same mate
for ten years--my Delilah.
Often we hunt as a pair,
randy carnivores feasting
on the flesh of rodents,
birds,
rabbits,
snakes,
and if we’re lucky,
a luscious cat
or a tiny dog.
It’s an hour’s flight to the ocean.
Seagulls are a delicacy,
and they are fast
and fun as prey.
Glenn Buttkus
Posted over at d'Verse Poets Pub
14 comments:
What a wondrous autobiography, first person in the life of a peregrine! Is this a real bird who is talking? It feels like it. If it isn't, you've made a believer out of me. I learned so much about them from your poem. Oh, lest I forget, the falcon-shaped post is fabulous, it moves across the screen as if it were flying.
I love this so much. Each description is superb and I love the first person perspective you take of this bird. It makes it so visual and evocative. Fantastic poem! I enjoyed reading it.
Like a falcon biography! Great form.
I love the zig-zag shape, the flight path of the peregrine, and the first-person point of view – the voice of the peregrine, which I imagine to be much like yours, Glenn. 😊 The self-description of this handsome lad is brilliant, especially his mythical ‘Stygian black helmet’ and blood-stained beak, ‘a dagger of feathered death’ indeed. I enjoyed all the peregrine facts too. I feel sorry for the seagulls.
You make the peregrines seem almost human, especially in their single-mindedness and lack of compassion.
a lethal missle, to be sure. I like the way you have inhabited this bird.
What everyone said. Marvelous.
Amazing Glenn! That was an exciting ride and I felt as if I was the falcon. Strong and fearless.
Wow, this was wonderful, Glenn. This magnificent prince of bird telling his story--and you managed to get his shape, too.
First of all, I love your formation of words on the page! Your poem is a wonderful story of one of natures most beautiful birds. Well done Glenn!
Great peregrine personification, Glenn! I like that he's a Pilgrim who immigrated to America...interesting facts dropped from the heights of dynamic writing.
A powerful and impressive poem that perfectly captures the falcon and then the concrete shape sets it all off perfectly
This is gorgeous Glenn and the shape of the poem only adds to the sense of flight and power- wonderful!
I love this!!!! I love how it is from the Falcon's point of view but so real-to-life, not silly or exaggerated. This is great.
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