Tuesday, March 22, 2016

Ascension of Larks

image borrowed from chron.com

Ascension of Larks

“The unseen essential awaits your enlightened heart’s
ascension to love.”--Bryant McGill

With Spring, beyond its fecundity, comes wings
of every conceivable variety; fluttering

on beauteous artful flights of Monarch butterflies,
      or humming drolly on wedges of dirt-brown munching moths, 
                 or flapping madly on descents of gnarly bats spinning
                         out of dark caverns, or an audacious glimpse of a majestic
               airie of bald eagles, or a clever cast of hungry peregrines
      dropping down like feathered missiles from the electric
azure ether to snatch rodents, or a bedazzling bevy  
of snow-white doves perching in the pink
blossoms of the tulip tree in our backyard,
or that gobbling gaggle of wild turkeys hav-
ing a squawk-off with an exotic muster of
albino peacocks on a ranch near the beach
above Hilo, or a frightened covey of quail
scurrying out of the tall grass along a dense forest trail, or a quacking
        brace of green-headed mallards flying dangerously low over some
                     concealed blinds ready to give buckshot greetings, or a
                           curt kettle of red-tailed hawks floating on thermals like
                                  bellicose kites on their daily rabbit raids, or a noisy
                                           colony of gray Pacific gulls at the beach fighting
                                                     a malicious murder of crows for scraps of
                                                     stale Wonder bread that we had tossed into
                                                     kelp-kissed negative ionic breezes, or amidst
a raucous riot of tropical colors spread out
over San Francisco Bay as frantic flocks
of conures glide masterfully around the
top of the Coit tower--              all flapping toward the crescendo, 
                                                 the epilogue,
                                                 as wondrous wedges, 
                                                 garrulous gaggles,
                                                 sensuous skeins,
                                                 flitting flushes,
                                                 skimming scolds,
                                                 scintillating sieges, &
                                                 wily wisps
of divers birds create a sky ballet to the angelic orchestrations provided by the 
restless winds, while swirling & twisting into living abstract ciphers, performing
elaborate murmurations that never cease to enthrall & entertain.

Glenn Buttkus


brudberg said...

Oh Glenn... you put me there in that avian beauty... how wonderful, how absolutely gorgeous....Especially that finale.

Gillena Cox said...

Wow you used a lot of bird groups, luv the shape of the poem too

much love...

Anonymous said...

Beautiful shape and gorgeous words describing a world I will never see, but you have given me in your poem 😊

Sanaa Rizvi said...

This is splendid work here :D left me breathless...!!

Grace said...

To behold and witness such dancing in the sky would be a joy to see Glenn ~

Love the passion and zeal, including the shape of your words on the screen ~


These are all my favorites:

or humming drolly on wedges of dirt-brown munching moths
gnarly bats spinning
a clever cast of hungry peregrines
dropping down like feathered missiles from the electric / azure ether
perching in the pink
gobbling gaggle of wild
a squawk-off with an exotic muster
brace of green-headed
ready to give buckshot greetings
kelp-kissed negative ionic breezes
flapping toward the crescendo
flitting flushes
scintillating sieges
twisting into living abstract ciphers

That was a pretty majestic presentation, yourself, Sir.

Blogoratti said...

Quite an in-depth piece of work really. Well done.

Walter J. Wojtanik said...

I love the movement in your swarm of words, Glenn! Well done!

De Jackson said...

Entranced by this, entirely.
You got so many of the group names in there, and used them so beautifully.
LOVE this:
of every conceivable variety; fluttering"

And your poem spills like a fluttering of wings, a murmuration of swallows, a flock...

Gayle Walters Rose said...

Bravo! Where mine went to humor, yours went to beauty with incredible visions of the amazing variety of avian groupings. LOVE it!!

lynn__ said...

LOVE this, especially the wild turkeys having a "squawk-off" with the albino peacocks...a fine feathered poem!

Unknown said...

I agree with Gayle, Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! (Applause and poesies thrown at the stage). I want to live in the world of this poem, in the ecstatic flying wing beat joy of abundance!

kaykuala said...

wily wisps of divers birds create a sky ballet
to the angelic orchestrations provided by the
restless winds,

Beautifully described of the gracefulness of flight. A classic ending Glenn!


tonispencer said...

The shape of this poem is beautiful. This is absolutely one of your best poems ever - the change of tone, subject, viewpoint - one of your best, truly and a most beautiful and exultant poems of all those on the dVerse road today. I had to read this thrice and enjoyed it more every reading. I hope you will share more of the Glenn and the heart that wrote this. Listening to the birds around and seeing them in the air just dramatized this joy of a poem. Please sir, I want some more.

Other Mary said...

I think you've got 'em all! And it's wonderful to hear it in your voice, Glenn.

Truedessa said...

This is fabulous and I am a bird lover. Using your peripheral view you captured such beauty. Hey, I wrote something on my blog you might be interested in when you get a chance.

lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.com said...

A sky ballet indeed. You have such a way with words, imagery, and though progression. I am right there with you and it is a joy.
Bellicose kites......well those two words jump out at me here in Bermuda. Good Friday is a national holiday and there is a tradition of kite flying -- but not just kite flying. Folks make their own kites and they add, somewhere on the kite, a cross in reference to Easter, and they also make them as "hummers." They dance and battle in the sky and hum loudly too! Bellicose kites....I shall remember those words as we join in for the the first time, in this island tradition. We shall return to Boston on Tuesday.....my reading and writing shall be back to a more normal schedule.....Bermuda beguiles and I am so late to the bar! :(

Carol Campbell said...

A lovely shape poem!

Mary said...

Wow, you really used a lovely collection of collective nouns & made me appreciate the beauty in nature! I enjoyed this, Glenn!

Katie Mia Frederick said...

Ah.. a UniVerse
of Birds..
of words floWinG
flying freely among
that move
no less
that fly hiGher
than lower.. my friEnd..:)