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Puissant Path
“If you can do something well, do it--take
a bite of gratification.”--Mike McManus.
Our first kiss
tasted
of honeysuckle and cayenne.
Each embrace after that
became turbo-charged.
My blood heated up,
raging through the arterial canals,
like bubbles rising in boiling water.
Everything
that could stretch and swell,
did so,
temperature spiked;
love sacks filled to bursting,
crimson turned to magenta.
Phallus and fingertips and eye lids
plumped with lust.
I could see, and feel
your body equally aroused,
your skin very warm to the touch;
your sighs and labored breathing
locked in concert,
your eyes turning from hazel
to forest green,
your pouty full lips
pink with longing.
That first glimpse
of your perky breasts
sent a shock to my hips,
and they began to tango;
your flat stomach still soft,
your fiery fingers kneading
my abs, chest and glutes.
Your mouth became
a serenade, stoking the tempo
of our encounter,
my mouth became a love ballad,
my tongue was a metronome,
activating undulation;
lips and tongue,
lips and tongue,
then rock hard access
to a fecund cavern,
where walls are slippery
yet firm, a shallow plunge,
a beautiful box canyon,
and although I was held captive,
I enjoyed the servitude;
syncopated strokes
from a amorous piston,
racing for the G-spot
at redline 7,000;
that space
where everything goes silent,
following salutes from the big bang,
where implosion & explosion lock arms,
ten throbbing seconds
in the orgasmatron,
while ejaculating energy sears
into the plaster walls,
and precious romantic fluids
are exchanged--
just as everything stops,
and we can barely hear
the crying and sighing,
as spirit intertwines
into Cupid’s helix,
and molten heart shards
fully penetrate
beyond the beyond,
just before,
exhausted love mists
become efficacious
and well spent.
Glenn Buttkus
Posted over at d'Verse Poets Pub
16 comments:
Now that's a perfect erotic poem! Whooooshh!❤️ I love how sensual the imagery is in this poem as the reader is led to experience myriad emotions especially; "crimson turned to magenta," "your pouty full lipspink with longing," and oh "molten heart shards fully penetrate beyond the beyond." Sigh .. thank you so much for writing to the prompt, Glenn!😃
Now THAT is erotica.
Wonderful.
I love that wild ride, Glenn, and you articulate it so well. My favorite part is this:
"as spirit intertwines
into Cupid’s helix,
and molten heart shards
fully penetrate
beyond the beyond,"
Exquisite and holy.
Wow Glenn! That was amazing.... I'm exhausted now and I might need a cigarette!!!
This is indeed erotica, no doubt about that. So sensual, powerful and what sounds like an evocative experience! Very powerfully written.
I felt like a voyeur of your love making, Glenn. I liked the image of Cupid's helix!
Wow, this is an erotic rollercoaster ride, strikingly visual and sensual! I like how you describe the lady's eyes 'turning from hazel/to forest green,' - very striking!
I love the combination of honeysuckle and cayenne in the first kiss, Glenn, which promised so much – and you delivered! I especially love the lines:
‘Your mouth became
a serenade, stoking the tempo
of our encounter,
my mouth became a love ballad,
my tongue was a metronome’.
Passionate and sensual love ballad. I love the sounds complementing the tides of the symphony of love.
HOT Glenn — cookin’! Loved the bold expression. I like my erotica with some strength, and this was strong... well written brother.
This is truly erotic... the detail of eyes changing color is truly an excellent detail in this lustful poem.
Excuse me, while I take a shower.
I think I have to renew my senior citizens card! Erotic? I should say!
Wow - you really captured the excitement of an erotic encounter! That was fabulous. <3
Exciting, fiery and passionate!
I like the way you take us into passion, but it leaves something, it is not just done, it is embodied.
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